city love

city love

A Poem by Christel Grady

you are

 

everything to me

 

I can see

 

tomorrow like

 

heaven at the end

 

of my tunnel

 

silently watching and

 

waiting for peace

© 2008 Christel Grady


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woooo. This is like an extended haiku. Each word carefully placed. Beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is soft, romantic and brings such hope in the end....
Beautifully written!

Lynda

Posted 10 Years Ago


Christel, this is intently presented with passion, with pace in detail,
seeing, watching and waiting for peace, "city love" heaven like a bright light
at the end of a tunnel, the imagery is transporting, and captures
the essence of the desirous meaning in a most subtlely profound way


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it moves across steep steps and then its hitting base this trail of found, deep moving, very good. the imagery is great.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple, succinct, profound. Good job, girl. ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The imagery you convey within your piece, takes hold of the reader and leads them on a journey of self actualization and discovery. Top Notch Job and A1 Work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Christel Grady
Christel Grady

Portland, OR



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