city love

you are

 

everything to me

 

I can see

 

tomorrow like

 

heaven at the end

 

of my tunnel

 

silently watching and

 

waiting for peace

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

woooo. This is like an extended haiku. Each word carefully placed. Beautiful.

[poet2angels (lynda)]

This is soft, romantic and brings such hope in the end....
Beautifully written!

Lynda

[Michael X]

Christel, this is intently presented with passion, with pace in detail,
seeing, watching and waiting for peace, "city love" heaven like a bright light
at the end of a tunnel, the imagery is transporting, and captures
the essence of the desirous meaning in a most subtlely profound way

[Tenten]

it moves across steep steps and then its hitting base this trail of found, deep moving, very good. the imagery is great.

[Siobhan MacIntyre]

Simple, succinct, profound. Good job, girl. ;-)

[MagicHearted Knight]

The imagery you convey within your piece, takes hold of the reader and leads them on a journey of self actualization and discovery. Top Notch Job and A1 Work!