Too Confused

Too Confused

A Poem by Crinkle°
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... so stupid mistakes. Deep apologies.

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All I can say is: sometimes some brains are too confused and make stupid mistakes
Sometimes some brains have been too much twisted
Let people feel like idiots,
Let a bad feeling
This feeling that you've hurt somebody
Without wanting it
I'm sure you know what I mean
You would like to vanish
And you intensely think in a poor sigh:
When all this story will finish?

© 2010 Crinkle°


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. great writing ... simple, profound and with a great message ...


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good here as well. I also have found that sometimes it's better to let the venom fade away instead of unleashing it upon the intended target.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh yes~ how often in my younger days I ached to swallow back the venom that has left my lips and caused another harm~ now I bite it down~ keep it down and permit it dissipate~ =)~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Crinkle°
Crinkle°

Paris, France



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