A Poem by ChristianM

The Ocean hurls it's waves upon me
Leaving me no way of remembering
What once happened through the closed walls of long lost past
My heart is an ocean and the sea inside is alive with life
Life vastly adventurous reeling about the uncharted map of my untraveled path
Outside this sheltered life lies a world of opportunity
Opportunity holding truth for what I am to become
I follow the light that leads my path
Where it will take me I do not know but when it comes I will go

© 2010 ChristianM

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The path you are on is Gods, pathway. No better path it's a every changing path of the inward man. God Bless You.

Posted 7 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this poem tells a tale of adventure within your own life and letting it flow naturally. I can picture the ocean scene in my mind.

Posted 9 Years Ago

One must always follow his/her own path and seek the
enlightenment and learn in the journey..well donE!

Posted 9 Years Ago

this poem is great for stating that you are going to follow your own path and the imagery is painted quite clearly but the flow is off.

Posted 9 Years Ago

The ocean is a wonderous place; I love this.

My heart is an ocean and the sea inside is alive with life

Beautiful line!!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Imagery is fantastic. Great work.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Very nicely epressed the imagery is simply fantastic. Excellent work.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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This is a awsome write!
"Life vastly adventurous reeling about the uncharted map of my untraveled path"
Its true you never know what lies ahead for yah, you can only go with the flow and let the current carry you where ever it is your going. Awsome write:D

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is beautifully portrayed. I often think the soul is very much like the sea, and I like the way you write about it. Just don't listen to the sirens ;P

Posted 10 Years Ago

The "path" we must follow to God is definitely confused for an obvious one. It is the path less traveled. It is probably not so obvious as a path through the woods. It may not have a trail to follow, but rather you may be pushing through webs and brush. Keep faith!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on January 3, 2010
Last Updated on August 9, 2010



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