Purple Rise

Bruise.

Just only,

Or may they only,

May they break blood,

Sink your words upon my skin.

May they break blood,

Or may they only,

Just only

Bruise.

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Christoph,

Painfully powerful

Always,

Matthew
A.

[Christoph Poe]

Thanks man. :)

[Matthew Kult]

Welcome.

[Purplerose]

Short but powerful. Enjoyed! :)

[Tasha]

Very impactful. I love how it sinks it and oozes out goodness. Excellent write.
~Tasha

[Christoph Poe]

Thank you very much! :)

[Tasha]

The pleasures all mine :)

[creativequill]

Short but impactful, very good :)

[Sami Khalil]

Sink your words upon my skin.
My fave.

[John]

I like the way the poem builds and then settles on the word Bruise.

[Christoph Poe]

Thank you! This was sort of an expertise by myself testing my limits of rising action, so it's nice for someone to notice in something so simply written! Thanks again. :)

[teardrop]

A really nice well written write

[Christoph Poe]

Thank you! :)

[TheDuchessDiary]

Beautiful! It's simple yet powerful. I got the feeling. :) nice work

[Christoph Poe]

Thank you!

[Jack...]

A very nice patterned poem you have shared with us here and the simplicity of it is what makes it really hit home.

[Christoph Poe]

Thank you! It's definitely one of my more shorter pieces. Haha

[Chaos_Collector]

You have brought simplicity while bringing significant meaning to this poem despite it being so short. Certainly a clever write

Chaos_Collector

[Christoph Poe]

Thank you kindly! :)

[Chaos_Collector]

You're welcome my fellow poet

Chaos_Collector