The narrow road

Every soul that dwells on earth walk a certain road. The Broadway is free,short and gives pleasure to the flesh. The narrow way holds suffering but in the end salvation awaits

TECHNICAL PROBLEM

Author's Note

Made changes as to start and end the poem with the word "Salvation".Please share your thoughts.

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

I just left the psychiatrists office. The problem with him, or the probity, is that he wants me to
adhere to the highest principles and ideas of honesty and uprightness. Even went as far as
to give me meditation apt for my phone where a woman with a calm voice extolls you to
concentrate on the things you are grateful for. I keep the faith that gratitude is past tense
participle not future tense probability. Salvation may be a narrow road, but its wider
than the heavens.

well done ....dana

[Chuba kichu]

Awhhh Thank you!! Good luck with yosrs ;-)

[Coyote Poetry]

"You're taking the narrow road.
Road to Salvation.
A hard road with a very good ending. I like the thoughts and the wisdom in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Chuba kichu]

Thank you coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Wynter Ignatius]

Wonderfully penned piece here that expresses your feeling quite well.

Kudos and keep it up please.

[Chuba kichu]

thank yo so much.

[TL Boehm]

amen and amen. for its brevity this poem speaks volumes.

[Chuba kichu]

May God bless you Boehm :-)

[Kayja Symphious]

I like it, I do. It makes one think, and I have to ask... Do you think pleasure is a bad thing?