A Poem by Chuii

Wouldn’t it be nice if you could know what it’s like to die and see how people react to your death but then be able to come back alive? Well, I already know how people would act. Some would cry for a

I made the promise
But missed the mark
I searched the skies
In the midnight dark
I found a key
Covered in rust
I buried my hopes
In a sea of dust
Stood up in the world
Without my share
Never was heard
I was a bird
Struck by a stone
Fell from the sky
Now was alone
I couldn’t fly
My wings are gone
All hope is lost
I’ll become something
I just don’t know what

© 2022 Chuii

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I'm not sure it is something I would want to know...people who I dislike might show up and that wouldn't sit well with me.
Very cool thoughts though in this poem.

Posted 4 Months Ago

Tom Sawyer did and there are accounts of people that have. It could be a nice surprise but could also be a crushing disappointment when those you trust and love the most turn out to be the ones that don't care or where the ones that were against you without you knowing it. Interesting and wonderful both in concept, design and execution.

Posted 4 Months Ago

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Added on November 4, 2022
Last Updated on November 4, 2022
Tags: Sad, alone, lonely, lost, die, death, broken, hurt, pain, memories, promise, guilt, jealousy, love



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