Used to...

Used to...

A Poem by Laylani Mullane

I used to never do this
Used to stand tall
Spit in the opposition's eye
Now I curl in
Protecting my tattered heart,
Exposed under my flayed skin.
Used to stand tall
Now I can barely crawl
Curling around myself
Desperate to protect.

© 2009 Laylani Mullane


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I like the words "I used to be." Was a country song with these words. Life make our defend downgrade with disappointments and loss. Even when we try to hide. We still must stand tall for the important things. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nicely handled picture of pain and self-protection.

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's very unique and nicely done. Keep it up.

Posted 14 Years Ago


We can only take so many blows... then we must leave the fray...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 17, 2009

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Laylani Mullane
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For me poetry is about emotion, and most of the time when I write I try not to edit too much, if at all, because I believe that it'll only dimish the emotion. For the last few years writing has helpe.. more..

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