Opening My Eyes Again

Me coming back to a place of inspiration and endless possibilities...

 

I'm back to a place

with overruling creativity

where my mind is again free

and there is nothing to slue me

 

Thoughts occur wildly

my mind is no longer old

I can see what's around me

and my mind is out of control

 

Everything around me

shines light to my eye

And I can vividly express

well beyond that fine line

 

The world now has colors

with bold, contrasting lights

The muse dances happily

between me and my mind

 

The possibilities are endless

and limitations have no hold

I feel free to speak loudly

with the truth to be told

 

My happy place

so wonderful and vast

I have finally returned to you

now I can see freely at last

 

Through the beautiful colors

of this stained glass...

 

 

 

Author's Note

Please leave constructive criticism and tell me what you think and how you feel of this...

Reviews

[~angelalala~]

the only 'constructive' criticism i can give you is stanza 3, first line, consider shortening it, so i flows with the rest of the piece. but overall i love this poem. so many of us live life with our eyes closed. the things we could see if we actually ever opened them. i loved the 4th & 5th stanzas of this poem. a beautifully written poem with a great message of hope & inspiration hidden within.

[DanaRegen]

Very nice poem, and thanks for entering it into my conest. I thought it was rather good and didnt see any grammar mistakes and such on. Lovely poem!