Forgiving my Mistakes

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So many mistakes

Wrong Choices I've made

I always am forgiven by friends

As if what I did was an aid.

 

No matter how many times I mess up

Somehow you forigve me,

Why? I can only expect, one day

You will not forgive me, and you shall be free

 

You should not deserve to forgive

All of my wrongs and rights

Too many mistakes, too numerous to count

Forgiveness has now grown to lose it's light

 

You always say, "It's ok, don't worry."

But with each mistake you only die inside

I can only try to not mess but, but fail

I could only shake my head, knowing you lied.

 

So much pain I've caused

Too many people hurt, due to me.

I seem to be the only one who can heal you

I am a monster, can't you see?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Everybody makes mistakes this poem sounds like maybe you need to forgive yourself and let yourself move on.. if someone around you allows you to keep lying to them then either they too are making or have made mistakes and are willing to take it in trade-off or they simply love you enough to overlook these things. We all feel like monsters when we hurt people but then try to correct what you can and move on.. simple. Like the work fascinated if this is real... everyone is worthy of forgiveness and moving on.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

No one is perfect...and everyone makes mistakes...but thats why there is forgiveness...for we all need to forgive and move on...but we shouldnt forget our mistakes so that in the future we may think twice before making the same mistake.
Great Job :)

[samdraMAYHEM]

O.o
Sounds like me when I broke up with my bf.......