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A Poem by Arya Le Dasmones
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Born of frustration with helplessness.

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I walk down the cracked pavement
of the cold cemented street,
breathing in exhaust fumes and 
the smoky fog of a dismal day
where it seems like there is no future 
here or ever, 
tasting the diamonds as they fall 
from the sky and tease my tongue and 
sizzle in steam when they hit 
the ruined buildings and I hear the silence 
that is louder than any when 
not even the mice have survived and the birds 
have yet to return to this monochrome 
world that is my world. No more 
green, I think to myself as I curl 
up, and release myself, reduced to another 
nondescript pile of ashes that 
curl away to dance with the wind.

© 2012 Arya Le Dasmones


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Arya Le Dasmones
An artifact of my rocky transition into a freer style. Please help and critique!

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So to me this poem seemed a bit dystopian, like you are looking at a world or place after a fallout or something. It also speaks of winter? I loved the line how the diamonds fall from the sky and tease your tongue, but sizzle on the buildings made me wonder if it was snow. Interesting, it made me think. There's so much description that I felt I was there. I can see the helplessness you feel in the poem as well especially in the end.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Arya Le Dasmones

11 Years Ago

Sizzle on the buildings was meant to represent acid rain, and the overall degradation of the environ.. read more

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Added on September 6, 2012
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