The Man in the Night

The Man in the Night

A Poem by Claire in VA
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a tale told to me by Grandpa

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O.B. Snead is a local man,

Who works on the rails in Crewe.

He’s curious a man as you ever met,

 From his head down to his shoes.

 

He began a haul to Norfolk one day,

‘Twas raining and changing to snow.

He sat in the seat of the engine black,

And began the trip rather slow.

 

The train it pulled all its cargo well,

It chugged and sang a steady song.

Ol’ Burley sang and told us jokes,

And tapped his foot right along.

 

He told us tales from long ago;

He began with a scary one.

Its eeriness made my flesh go cold,

 I sort of wanted to run.

 

“We were driving down route 40 you see,

Just the two of us Sneads.

To light out to the Reinicke place,

To check the crab apple trees”

 

“Lewis jumped and his snack he dropped,

He nearly choked on his cake.

He screamed 'slow down!’ which I tried to do,

As I slammed my foot on the brake.”

 

“The brakes they squealed on the pavement there,

We came to a halting stop.

But as we did, we hit a man,

Right there, in front of The Shop.”

 

“His mop was nappy and curly it seemed,

So was the hair on his chest.

The coveralls marked with grease and sweat,

Were unsnapped and grimy at best.”

 

“His pocket it held some blackies with tree,

A red kerchief, and a pen.

We saw his eyes squint at us,

His smile, beguiling, was thin.”

 

“He carried a brown paper bag for sure.

It contents, a bottle of wine.

Wild Irish Rose, it smelled so sweet,

Although not very fine.”

 

“After we hit him with a strong WHAM,

We didn’t know what to do.

Lewis and I got out of our seats,

And ‘round the truck we flew.”

 

“We checked underneath my Ford right then.

It was turning dusky dark.

Nothing we saw resembled a man.

My dog, he started to bark.”

 

“The ditches where my black dog howled,

Revealed nothing at all.

As a chill set in in our very bones,

We decided to belt out a call”

 

“‘Heyyyyyyy.  Where are you????????,’ we yelled,

Hoping to hear a faint grunt.

We heard not an utter that dreary eve,

And decided to restart our hunt.”

 

“’Let’s check underneath the hood,’” I said.

“’It’s not likely, but there’s a chance

That we hit him so hard his body was slung,

Quicker than a glance.’”

 

“We peered in the dark at the engine itself,

No blood or gore to be seen.

Then slammed the hood and went to The Shop

To see who could intervene.”

 

“The fellas listened as we told them we crashed,

Into a broad-shouldered man.

Their eyes grew wide as the tale we told

Chased them into their vans

 

“One of the guys, he yelled to us,

‘That’s Nathan’s ghost you just hit.’

They pulled out the lot and away they all flew,

Not slacking up one bit.

 

We ran to the truck, got into the cab,

Squealed out of the parking place.

The gravels they flew, and the dust it rose;

We bolted as if in a race

 

We never heard tell of that ghost since then;

We even searched in bright day.

For a tiny scrap of that coverall suit,

Or a drop of blood or decay.

 

 

O.B. Snead was a tale-telling man,

Our interest he did keep.

Those days on the railroad passed quickly with him;

A year felt like a week.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2014 Claire in VA


Author's Note

Claire in VA
I am trying to preserve some of Grandpa's stories in my writing. Grandpa and Uncle Lewis told this particular story every so often. When I went riding around with Grandpa in his old Ford truck, each time we passed The Shop, he would hit the brakes and say, "BAM! That's where I hit that man in the coveralls long ago." "The Shop" is nothing more than a place on the side of the road where the local men hang out. There are a few benches between the trees that are there. There is gravel, dirt, and red clay there. That's it. There is probably enough room for 6 or 8 vehicles to park. To this day, people still hang out there.

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Lover of old stories of railroad cars and guitars song that my daddy used to make us sing along mostly sad songs The kind Hank Williams used to sing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Captivating and maintained the meter and theme with a special expertise. Very well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


nothing like getting our hair to stand up on our necks...

great story and the way you put it into your words...transcribes it rather well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Claire in VA

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Jacob. I enjoyed writing it.
Claire
very beautiful write and beautiful dedication

Posted 9 Years Ago


Claire in VA

9 Years Ago

Why thanks Andrea!
Claire :)
Wonderful hun, beautiful dedication :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


Claire in VA

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reading. and thanks...
A beautiful write. You have told a story and told it well. Good job with this! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Claire in VA

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
What a brilliant dedication through such a mysterious tale.. and done with such a powerful rhythm. Love the retelling and all the shades and shadows it holds!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Claire in VA

9 Years Ago

Wow. Thanks for noting the rhythm. I tried. :)
A great tale penned in an interesting and entertaining narration. You gave more life and humor to that event. Also, I am glad to know that your grandpa 'lives' in your writing. I envy you 'cause you had storytelling sessions with him. Both of my grandfathers died before I had mastered my ABCs.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Claire in VA

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Blue! I do consider myself lucky to have known 3 of my grandparents very well. I am bles.. read more
A very creative way to preserve cherished stories that have historic or whimsical elements. You pen it with rich appreciation and powerful intentions...Excellent...:)................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Claire in VA

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Sami. I'm so glad that you came by to read and comment!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....................

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I am here to read a lot and write a little. I love, love, love to read! I love English. I love poetry, history, and historical fiction. I teach fourth grade. I play piano at church. I love all.. more..

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