This feeling

This feeling

A Poem by Clare the Artist

The feeling of FINALLY being at peace
No longer caring about stress
but instead enjoying life to its fullest.
Is it REAL?
or is it just a figment of my IMAGINATION?
An illusion created by the despair i suffered so far?

That feeling of HAPPINESS,
smiling a real smile from ear to ear
instead of something fake.

Do i enjoy these feelings
i do not know yet, but i 
do know that i'm DONE with all.

© 2012 Clare the Artist


Author's Note

Clare the Artist
been a while. would like critiques and anything else plz

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This is highly intriguing because you say that it is a real happiness, but you can't even enjoy it because you're not sure if it's just an illusion. Nice write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


makes you wonder if you are stress free and feeling at peace why do we wonder if it is genuine or fleeting. clever write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

When you feel like that - peaceful, grinning ear to ear - don't doubt it! Take it when you can and learn to make it happen more often. :) Life can't always be happy and stress free, but I believe we can try to reach a place where we have a peaceful core that is steady through life's storm. Only one thing to ask - the last stanza gave me a bit of pause - not sure on this and wonder if you could search your heart and find a clearer way to express it...that's just my thought to take or leave.

Posted 9 Years Ago


emotiions are so vivid in your write, "the feelings" we can only hope they are true with doubts harvesting our mind.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice poem! Definity reflects that awsome feeling of being stress free and enjoying it! I like it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wonderful this. This is true free verse and what's great about this is that it possesses that rare authenticity. Your confusion is clear though I'd have loved to read what caused you to ask yourself such questions

Posted 9 Years Ago


Clare the Artist

9 Years Ago

thanks & i see that your an anime fan as well. FullMetal Alchemist

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Clare the Artist

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Hi im 16. I like to draw. Write music. Play sports. Loves to have fun. Doesn't like drama at all. Chill person. My fav type of music is Rock but doesn't mind any other kind. I would like to be an auth.. more..

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