Dream

Dream

A Poem by Dead Angel
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A Lullaby in the making

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Dream my little darling
Let the Angels take you away.
Dream my little darling
Of a place where you can play.

Let the wind lift you high
As you fly out of sight.
Let the wind lift you high
As you soar into...the...night.

Sleep in Peace
As the stars shine in the sky
Sleep in Peace
I will never leave your side.

Dream my little darling
Let the angels take you away.
Dream my little darling
Of a place where...you...can...play.

© 2008 Dead Angel


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AAAwwwwwweee Claudia my angel, this is so beautiful. It maybe cheeky of me but I almost feel like you were here reading this beautiful lullaby to me in person. Such a beautiful selfless poem hun, I love it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like this one.. Good Job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem brought tears to my eyes... made me remember a child that should have been born to my arms that met angels instead of existence. So lovely, so soft yet strong. I feel that pull from inherent sadness to a sense of peace and joy. I will look to the heavens a bit differently tonight. Thank you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow...so peaceful! something out of a childrens lullaby or a book. i really liked how it had a scence of flow and repetitiveness. very sweet in deed!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It did have such a beautiful feel to it. Just like something you might sing to a small child.
It is a very sweet piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Most don't like the repetitiveness of pieces like this one. I do know the need for them. I have a few myself and just hate it when people say - NO REPEATING - don't listen for it would really ruin beautiful simple pleasure, like this one. Brava

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

makes me want to fade away into dreams.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is truly lovely....it would make a beautiful lullaby! Comforting words...and images. Amazing write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem, play little girl play with your spirit in flight, Shelly

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Definitely a lullaby in the making...it was so adorable and sweet I loved it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Dead Angel
Dead Angel

Weslaco, TX



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