Sometimes

Sometimes

A Poem by Eleanor

Sometimes

Sometime I wish I had friends

It’s sad to say

But I don’t have any

 

Sometimes

Sometimes I wonder what it would be like

To fit in

To be normal

To be what society is looking for

 

Sometimes

Sometimes I think it’s too much

That’s there’s nothing left

That I should just give in

© 2012 Eleanor


Author's Note

Eleanor
Not my best work. Considered not posting it but I thought 'why not post it to see what people think'.

Reviews would be lovely. x

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I have wondered the same, dear Eleanor, but I have come to discover that it is better as they say(and it sounds rather cliche') to be ones self. That when they say you will find people who love you for who you are, it's true.
This was a wonderful piece. The topic seems to be well thought out and you did a excellent job expressing what you had to say. Well done indeed!
And please don't give in. For if you do, we might not be able to read such lovely pieces of poetry.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eleanor

7 Years Ago

Thank you



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I have wondered the same, dear Eleanor, but I have come to discover that it is better as they say(and it sounds rather cliche') to be ones self. That when they say you will find people who love you for who you are, it's true.
This was a wonderful piece. The topic seems to be well thought out and you did a excellent job expressing what you had to say. Well done indeed!
And please don't give in. For if you do, we might not be able to read such lovely pieces of poetry.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eleanor

7 Years Ago

Thank you
I assure you have friends-we are you friends.
I assure-you perfectly fit in the expectation of what society looks for-it is a social network of writers.
I assure you have a treasure to give in-the universe waits your writes eagerly.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Hi! I'm Eleanor. I'm 18 and I live in New York. I love music and writing and yeah. If you really wanna know more, message me. One Direction, Cher Lloyd, Ed Sheeran, Olly Murs, Conor Maynard, The Wan.. more..

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