Why her?

Why her?

A Poem by Eleanor

I don’t get it

Why her?

Can’t you see?

I can love you more

Than she ever could

 

Open your eyes

Wake up

From your little dream world

You were meant for me

Not her

Can’t you see it?

 

Can’t you see?

That went I see you with her

I die a little inside

As it feels so wrong

It makes me

Drop to my knees

And cry

And cry

And cry

 

So I hope you

Will see the light
That I need you

And that you need me

© 2012 Eleanor


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I love this very flowy :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very emotional... nicely written :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


such an emotional heart tugging write, nicely expressed

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really loved this poem. I really wish men would truly understand what we feel. It would be a lot easier on us. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Eleanor
Eleanor

New York, NY



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Hi! I'm Eleanor. I'm 18 and I live in New York. I love music and writing and yeah. If you really wanna know more, message me. One Direction, Cher Lloyd, Ed Sheeran, Olly Murs, Conor Maynard, The Wan.. more..

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