Chapter 2: March 10th-Liam

Chapter 2: March 10th-Liam

A Chapter by Eleanor

March 10th 2011

So..Uh… My mom made me start writing in this journal. She doesn’t understand how it would ruin me at school if any of my friends found out. I would never hear the end of it. I would probably lose ALL of my friends. Expect Demi, she wouldn’t leave me for that. Sure she would tease me but never stopped talking to me. That’s why I like her. Like REALLY like her. I could never actually tell her my feelings though. She doesn’t feel the same way so it would make it so awkward. Plus she’s way too good for a loser like me. So that’s why I gave up all hope of us being together. I just try to not show my feelings when we’re hanging out, which is really hard. That’s how much I like her. She’s one of the only reasons I don’t give on people. Some days I think about telling her and I plan out exactly what I’m going to say, only to chicken out. I won’t ever have the guts to do it. Maybe I could send her a note saying what I want to tell her. Hm, that sounds like a good idea. Going to go do that now. So uh I guess I say bye now? I’m not sure how you are suppose to end these things……

--Liam (That’s how you end it right?)

© 2012 Eleanor

Author's Note

So this is my first time trying to write like a guy...I don't think it's that good. It doesn't really sound like a guy. But whatever...What do YOU think?

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really well written good work keep it up

Posted 9 Years Ago

Really Really well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I thought this was nicely written. It's a good try for writing like a boy. That's a good thing though. I like Liam and it's cute that he feels the same way about Demi. Good write. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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