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What happened?

What happened?

A Poem by Eleanor

What happened?

It feels like it was just yesterday

We were all just kids

With no drama

And no worries

 

Honestly

It feels like we have been living

On fast forward

Can't we stop the tape

And rewind a bit

Back to those days?

 

Maybe we could have a party

Blare the music

Get the floor to shake

Who knows?

Maybe that's the closest we will be

To those days

Ever again

© 2012 Eleanor


Author's Note

Eleanor
Is it just me or is does the thrid stanza seem silly?

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No, it isn't silly. But it doesn't really fit with the first two stanzas. You should try to say something more about rewinding life; that is a good concept.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on February 24, 2012
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Eleanor
Eleanor

New York, NY



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Hi! I'm Eleanor. I'm 18 and I live in New York. I love music and writing and yeah. If you really wanna know more, message me. One Direction, Cher Lloyd, Ed Sheeran, Olly Murs, Conor Maynard, The Wan.. more..

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