[Im]perfection

[Im]perfection

A Poem by Saturnalia
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All the small things.

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A leaf on my porch
A crack in the wall
A scuff on my shoe
A nail in the hall
A smudge on the screen
A burn on the pan
A fold in the seam
A card in the fan
A being unaware
A time unheard
A line between
A missing word

A flaw in my eyes
A thing to notice
A clearer view
A world in focus

© 2009 Saturnalia


Author's Note

Saturnalia
I wanted to write, so I did. :D

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This was good poem that should be respected. Many people go through life looking for perfection. When in reality world id never perfect. We all try so hard to please one another that we forget to look at the small things in life. Great Write! I will be looking for more in the near future from you.

Humbly,
Jwana Creer Yeshua

Posted 14 Years Ago


Indeed you did, lol. I like this a lot. It's short, but full of saucyness. (New word I made up. You love it ;p)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really liked it. I enjoy minute details that are often unnoticed.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is great. I really like how your format this poem. You took all those small imperfections and turned them into the world view. I'm impressed, I knew you were a good writer, but wasn't sure how far you talents rose. I find that there is no limit to what you can do with any topic that is before you...Great write

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is really good the first part/paragraph was my favorite! :) very nice!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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