My Sweet Addiction

My Sweet Addiction

A Poem by Angela Sparks

My sweet addiction

Like homemade wine

Like the summers first wind

Or the sunshine

My sweet addiction

Like the warm breeze

In the cold evening

The way your body moves

And your smile shines

Is better then any beer

Or wine

To be lost and drunk

In your eyes

Is a dream come true


Yes my sweet addiction

So loving and caring

So soft and vibrant

So rough and loose

My sweet addiction

I'm better then I was yesterday

And yet still untamed

You keep me calm

Yet you make me wild

My sweet addiction

Has been you for awhile...

© 2015 Angela Sparks

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Author's Note

Angela Sparks
My friend had me post this one. It was stuffed in the bottom of my drawer for a reason cx
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I'm glad that your friend got this out of your drawer and you posted it here. This poem is raw emotion from your heart and those are the best poem of all. Nicely done Angela.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Angela Sparks

6 Years Ago

I get anxiety when I post super emotional things. It makes me vulnerable in real life because I get .. read more

6 Years Ago

Oh I see. As far as I know people here at WC are very supportive of writers. I have never seen anyon.. read more
Angela Sparks

6 Years Ago

Yes I've noticed c:
Hey thank you for sharing this one. I think this very sweetly written. I was just talking to a friend and she suddenly said 'I'm high on you' I got this feeling in your words. Love definitely makes you high. Like a wine, like a beer and like a drug. Good write.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Angela Sparks

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much! That's definitely what I was going for :) I was just nervous about trying a new s.. read more
Nothing offensive here :) I really liked it, liked your creativity and wording.
"To be lost and drunk
In your eyes
Is a dream come true
Anytime "

Awesome work I hope to read more of it :)

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angela Sparks

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much:) I always add the "notify me of offense" is more of a polite thing for me (: but .. read more

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Added on May 30, 2015
Last Updated on May 30, 2015
Tags: addiction, love, drunk, you, admiration, young, vibrant, loose, rough, sweet, warm, wind, summer, beer, wine


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