Fiction

Fiction

A Poem by Judas Hammer
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Sometimes Fiction and reality dance a dance of delusion.....

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Fiction

 

I make myself crazy

Playing the fame game

Reality and fiction soon become

The same

It’s the delusion of the illusion

That’s keep me flowing

And the faces of the damned glowing

And showing pretty teeth

With deep blue crocodile tears

Pouring out of putrid ducts

For years and years

Traveling from eyes to ears

Gossip like razor blades

Cutting through barricades

Plasma flowing like marinade

I seem stuck

About to be hit by a Mack truck

Man I seem so lucky

But I'm not on my own

I saw three people in the park

Making a car their home

 And domicile

While billionaire have their eyes on Mars

And have or awhile

Yet, I make myself crazy

To believe these dreams will come together.

As I play the game where reality and fiction are the same.

© 2013 Judas Hammer


Author's Note

Judas Hammer
Fiction......

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Reality and fiction soon become
The same -- these lines really speak to me.

I can definitely see the Buckowski influence in your writing; you are pointed, bright, articulate and above all very honest. You make a great comparison to the lives of so many who are constantly "in search" of the ellusive dream...but the dream is always so...ellusive.

Yet, i make myself crazy
To believe these dreams will come together. -- So true...I've been there.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i constantly think that i'm crazy for following my dreams... this piece was poignant and truthful. it almost has the rhythm of a rap and flowed very well!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Reality and fiction soon become
The same -- these lines really speak to me.

I can definitely see the Buckowski influence in your writing; you are pointed, bright, articulate and above all very honest. You make a great comparison to the lives of so many who are constantly "in search" of the ellusive dream...but the dream is always so...ellusive.

Yet, i make myself crazy
To believe these dreams will come together. -- So true...I've been there.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it seems like fiction but its also a reality, awesome poem man, this one and 'Waiting in Line' are really good, they are topics I defineatly would point out and write about,

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the poem flowed really well, nice work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Judas Hammer
Judas Hammer

The City of Angeles, CA



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