Bottled Emotions

Beautiful, Innocent, Unique...

Is that a good critique? 

No?

Charming, Irreplaceable, Soul Mate...

Is that a proper rate?

Still No?!

Well...

I just can't describe you....

"Perfect?" 

Is that the right word?

No, of course not....

You're beyond perfection...

Does that mean

I love you?

No,

That can't be it,

It doesn't exist...

Life is a dark abyss

Of disappointment 

And rare happiness

That disappears,

Never spent.

But you....

You're REALLY aren't the same

As anyone else...

Yes,

PERFECTION.

Don't you see?

The only way to 

Prove what you mean

To me

Is to write in uppercase 

To disprove any distaste

I can't possibly have for you.

Oh My God....

I wish I was a poet;

Golden tongue,

Twinkling words,

Glittering images,

Then,

Maybe,

I could win a home

In your 

Never-Scarred Heart.

Or at least,

That's what it seems to be

To Me.

I know these words 

Are amateur,

But they prove 

That just thinking about you 

Makes me a rambling idiot,

That I feel indescribable passion

When I think about you....

Corrupted Innocence.... 

Are you innocent?

Or are you just

Perfection in a human body?

You're from another world,

Aren't you?

I've know a lot of people 

In my life...

But you!

You must be made of 

Pixie Dust, 

Twinkling Stars, 

And 

Crystal Dreams!

Crap...

I suck at this...

Do you love me or not?

Just tell me so I can save my heart.

COME ON!

You've shown me all the signs

But your still aren't mine.

You're a diamond in a mine

Waiting for lonely heart to discover you,

You broken, beauty!

You're worth it all though.

I don't really know...

You're smile,

I can't really ever forget,

Your eyes,

I can't ever unsee.

You beaten, pure beauty.

You're in my heart forever.

Can I really take on this love endeavor?

Everything I think I've ever wanted.

My dreams,

Your face is haunting;

A ghost of what can be

If I was just a little more pretty?

Are you only on my side out of pity?

Let's get down to the nitty-gritty.

DO YOU LOVE ME?

Too straightforward?

At least I'm no coward...

Right?

Am I just scared of love's might?

Deep Breath...

I have nothing wrong with me,

So

If you don't love me...

It's really your loss...

But I'm not trying to be egotistical!

Please believe me!

I love you!

Is all of this really true?

Author's Note

Ehhh...I didn't really write this to be taken seriously about it;it's just a way to get these bottled up emotions out, so, obviously, it's all over the place. But if you want to critique it, be my guest.

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[Alicia Hirshey]

I found myself asking the same questions about my current relationship. I don't know it this supposed to be taken seriously but it touched me as if it should be.