Inside Out

Inside Out

A Poem by Coll Silvermoon
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What do you truly know?

"

What does it mean

to be inside out

does it mean i am glad

or do i want to shout


If your feelings are

only skin deep

then where are the

promises you keep?


Do you hide them

deep in your soul

because inside out

they’ve nowhere to go


Do you hide them

on top of your skin

so that when inside out

they are trapped within


Questions, but no answers

life’s riddles keep on

where do your promises

go when you’re gone


Inside out

sometimes how i feel

when i am questioning

what is real

© 2014 Coll Silvermoon


Author's Note

Coll Silvermoon
Thank you for reading.

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I really like this, especially the 3rd stanza - one suggestion, perhaps remove that from promises you keep - just a suggestion, mind you, and nowhere could be joined.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coll Silvermoon

10 Years Ago

good suggestions, I will implement them :) Thanks.

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Coll Silvermoon
Coll Silvermoon

Dallas, TX



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I am an aspiring poet. I have enjoyed poetry for as long as I can remember. It was my favorite part of English / Literature in High School. I write what I feel into words, I also write about my env.. more..

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