Out of the Dark

Out of the Dark

A Poem by Coll Silvermoon
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When you hurt so much you cannot create joy

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Days go by

as the world despises

my feelings toward myself


To give up

when all is not lost

is a sign to be taken carefully


Don’t give up

never give in to the pain

try hard to continue on with your happiness


Into light

Out of the dark

Pain is gone, within a blink


Try as you may

I will not go back

You think you won

You can never win


In the light

In the day

Thrust from dark

Thrust from pain


You came through

When you least expected to

Give yourself credit

Where credit is due


Out of the dark

Once again

Life’s own triumphs

Have no end.

© 2014 Coll Silvermoon


Author's Note

Coll Silvermoon
It feels like a lifetime since I wrote last.

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It was months for me, then all of a sudden I wrote like 5 pieces in one week. It's just something that's very hard to shake that we all become immune to.

Writing compositions in English class was my favorite part of school, so I can identify with that. My friends thought I was nuts, but it taught me well.

You show more than aspiration, Coll...I think you've achieved!

Posted 7 Years Ago


You get the credit where credit is due as you gain where you feel with the pain...Splendid...:)................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coll Silvermoon

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sami
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..................
I like the way this piece moves from dark to hope. I have only one question, should it be Days gone by, the world's despise or Days gone by the world despises?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coll Silvermoon

10 Years Ago

Thanks, I will make that adjustment

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Added on March 31, 2014
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Tags: Out of the Dark, Coll Silvermoon, Poetry

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Coll Silvermoon
Coll Silvermoon

Dallas, TX



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I am an aspiring poet. I have enjoyed poetry for as long as I can remember. It was my favorite part of English / Literature in High School. I write what I feel into words, I also write about my env.. more..

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