A Night's Fog

I am lost within the Night...

A Nights Fog
A Poem by Colton Warr

One more shot until the world spins
What dust has been kicked up by my actions?
Tonight I just can't seem to think
If you'd like to exit just tell me when

One more place before this all ends
A bunch of night owls, just me and my friends
You've come to say that we are on the brink?
I'm here to declare, rules are meant to suffer bends

One more kiss before I die, please
And then look at this iPhone and say cheese
Let's document it all before we sink
And fall down underneath the palm trees

One more night before we all cease
If you need warmth I can become your fleece
And did you catch that? At you, I sent a wink
This night will forever hold of me, a piece

Reviews

[cycy]

super late review....have been away for a verrrryyy lo time, but i must say its refreshing to find nohing has changed. still very great poetry and something to get me thinking about everything. i loved it. kudos.

[John Ciarmello]

Hello Colton,
I liked this piece very much. I felt a looming sense of lose here! "One more night before we cease." "One more place before this ends." It brought me in and out of the light for sure. It is well written and seemingly full of genuine thought. Thank You for the read Colton! Best wishes!

[Hessy]

Nice poem ....well written

[lovergirl]

simple yet full of emotional within , i really liked it *-* thanks for sharing , it's been a while since i haven't read such kind of beautiful pieces

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Nice poem thanks for sharing the wonderful talent.

[Celie Rose]

Enjoyed reading your poem..I get a sense of happy memories with dear friends. Time does go on..cherished memories are forever. "If you need warmth I can become your fleece." Well written and expressed.

[ajelly]

Loved this piece. Felt it.

[horizon]

Thay is like holding on to the moments we live in..which we go through...we cherish sometimes regrets but that's what life is abt...moments keeps us alive...I liked it

[Dana Ferguson]

It's definitely interesting how we hold onto memories with such detail..To me it felt like a collage of broken love images, that took me back to some of my own foggy nights... I enjoyed the read and for what it's worth great job! Thanks for sharing :)

[Bear]

What a night, sounds like all the steps to the ritual was observed except the bowing to the porcelain God to finish it :~) Great writing exercise, it is somewhat whimsical and cryptic at the same time, it offers different levels of understanding to different readers due to the own experiences. Outstanding! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!