Queen of Suns

Careful, the ending is a bit....hot....

Queen of Suns

A Poem by Colton Warr 

A kiss from the sun, oh how well it burns 

And for the next, oh how my lips yearn 

Her Solar Flares have scorched through the ice

Forever destined to float through space, oh how the tables turn 

A kiss from the sun, oh how well it soothes

And the blood within my veins, oh how it moves

I am caught within her gravity's pull and still feel safe

But tell me how it is, that a ball of fire's surface is so smooth? 

A kiss from the sun, oh how well it stings 

And perhaps I will travel to Saturn and present, to the sun, a ring 

Would the sun ever decide to spend the rest of her life with a man who was cold? 

If I had her love, only then, would I feel like a king 

A kiss from the sun, oh how well it sears 

At times, as her lips peel from mine, I am moved to tears 

What on earth could ever compare to her flame?

I want to melt away with her for the rest of my years 

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Her hair pours like fire from her head 

I noticed it all the way from the moon 

To be rotting here so far from her is the one thing I dread

I pray to the stars and cosmos that I can kiss her soon

 

Her smile illuminates even the darkest corners of space

I see it calling from a corner of my own 

I want to go to it and disappear with her without a trace 

The starlight, the cosmos, the heavens are all things that, to me, she has shown 

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I have been kissed by the sun, oh, have I ever

How did I breathe, how did I live, before I met her

The Sun and The Moon together, oh what beauty

Every flare and ember from her I will forever treasure 

A Moon, I was, thought to be lost within space

But saved, I have been, by the absolute glow of her face 

The shine of her smile pulls me in to stay awhile

A Moon with nowhere to be, I have now found my place

I have been kissed by the sun, oh, how I have

There must be a God, how did I find her without a map?

And I never want to go back, her warmth feels like home 

Can someone thank this God for her, on my behalf 

A Sun, she is, a queen of warmth and fire

But enraptured, she has made me, every flame I do admire

The taste of her lips has me in full eclipse 

I want The Queen of Suns until her heat expires 

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My whispers turn your glow into a red, rampant rage of fire 

They speak of how I wish to not stop until you tire 

The moans, the hands gripping and grasping, you clutch anything you can 

The Sun and the Moon making love, I can hear heavens choir 

My hands gripping your waist as I thrust, pull and push at you 

We make a mess all over the solar system, oh what a view 

I don't stop, I don't quit, my insertion has you seeing stars 

My tongue dances along the suns neck, how I adore her, if only she knew 

My lips carefully caressing The Suns back as I pull her fiery hair 

I bring her eyes close to mine, so while I'm in her, we can stare 

She's getting close now, as her moans enter my mouth 

I go deeper as she explodes for me, what an interstellar affair

Author's Note

More words to come...

Reviews

[ElizaB]

Thanks for entering my competition.

I liked your use of personification and the juxtaposition of your topic. Well done.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I appreciate your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for reading!

[wordman]

well the end was a little hot,but i liked it

[Colton Warr]

Thank you, my good friend! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I hope you had a lovely Christmas!

[Nora]

This is a-m-a-z-i-n-g , seriously. Great deep and emotional work .
You are a great writer 👏👏👏

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Nora! Your words are too kind! I appreciate you giving this a read!

[Nora]

My pleasure :)

[Dara]

Reading your words and suddenly the chill I felt when I opened the front door has dissipated into a warm glow all over. Simply stunning and the images are captivating. Thank you for sharing!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Dara! I appreciate your kind words! I'm glad this took you to a hotter place! Thanks for giving it a read!

[Bear]

I didn't know you were a member of the oldest religion and a very devoted one. Not sure other sun worshipers would appreciate you making the sun hotter with your some what graphic description. Very creative and vivid imagery that may have been a little to vivid :~) Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, my friend! I appreciate the kind words! I've got more more words on they way! Thanks for reading!

[Mavericks]

I simply loved it! Nothing more, nothing less. After a long time, dude.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I know it's been awhile. I'm here to stay. I have plenty more coming your alls way! Thanks for reading!