But Surely

But Surely

A Poem by Comatose

Though this was made months ago, and I didn't think I would share it with the world.. I'm thinking differently now.

If only my words could embody
The way the feelings make my skin tingle.
When your eyes find my own,
I fear I could melt where I stand.
The sound of your voice
Whisks my own away
And when your lips form
    that beautiful smile of yours
Time itself stops to stare.
But surely,
     You are the envy
        Of all the angels.


© 2016 Comatose

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Added on February 13, 2016
Last Updated on February 16, 2016



Twin Falls, ID

I write poetry and stories, which is obviously why I'm on this site. I just want some good criticisim and other people's thoughts on my writing style, simple as that. more..

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