Those Three Words

Those Three Words

A Poem by Jills
"

Three words that are so hard to say...

"

It’s scary,

saying those three little words.

They mean so much,

and if they’re overused

can completely destroy

what it stands for.

Yet if not said enough

can cause everything around

to come tumbling down.

 

Unsure,

these strange feelings.

Peace, happiness;

complete bliss.

Emotions galore

all because of this

one special person.

 

With them,

I feel safe, happy;

unstoppable.

But when they’re gone,

discomfort, sadness;

I feel sick to my stomach.

 

How can this be

in such little time,

to fall for them

completely,

utterly,

head over heels.

 

Those three little words,

so foreign and scary,

this time slip

right off my lips.

I say what I mean

and mean when I say.

I love you,

and it grows every day.

© 2010 Jills


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I really like your first stanza. well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love how this poem contrasts between wanting to say it, but hesitating. But I probably would've left out "I love you" at the end, because it is so obvious that it's completely unnecessary. A beautiful poem, and you broke the lines at the right parts.

I wrote a story with the same name, btw, haha. :p

Posted 9 Years Ago



Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

184 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on March 26, 2010
Last Updated on March 26, 2010

Author

Jills
Jills

Newbury, OH



About
The name is Jilleen E. Quigley, but I prefer to go by Jill, it's a lot shorter, dont ya think? The age I am is 20 years, but don't let that fool you. I can be rampant as as 15 year old, or just as wi.. more..

Writing
Broken Promises Broken Promises

A Story by Jills


Musical Drug Musical Drug

A Poem by Jills


I Wish I Could I Wish I Could

A Poem by Jills