Nobody

Nobody

A Poem by Jills
"

feeling useless and no one cares

"

Nobody

knows what lies

underneath

these broken eyes

 

Nobody

has seen the tears

unbeknownst

to fellow peers

 

Nobody

can feel the pain

wondering

when I’ll feel again

 

Nobody

knows the truth

they don’t know

how I feel about you

 

Nobody

can fix this broken heart

clueless

as to how it fell apart

 

Nobody

will ever be there

showing

how much they care

 

Nobody

can love me

I am

unlovable

 

 

© 2010 Jills


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wonder why nobody's reviewed this before...great poem, methinks, it's really sad, and i'm sure we've all been stuck in that rut one time or another. the structure of this is pretty nice too. overall great job

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Jills
Jills

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