Day With You

Day With You

A Poem by CompellingComposer

Another poem for my boyfriend and anyone out there who has a special love in their life.

My beating heart guides the way
As I sail the ocean blue
Through wicked winds and harsh waves
Just to spend one day with you

I was upon the shore of a sandy desert
My ship destroyed but my willpower not
I kept voyaging in the beating sun
My destination I have not yet forgot

I continued my trek to you
When I reached a mountain tall and high
But I only thought of how my trip would soon be done
As I climbed the mountain that touched the sky

Finally I had reached my destination
The mountain’s peak
Even though I was very tired
For you I began to seek

I looked and looked for you
At a careful but fast pace
Only to find you, arms wide open
And I fell into your embrace

We laid underneath the beautiful stars
And the sky’s blanket of navy blue
Everything I had done to get here
Was worth my one day, with you

© 2011 CompellingComposer

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A very beautiful and eloquent poem. Your boyfriend is vey lucky to have someone as expressive as you.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I will say that this poem is as powerful as sweet. Your love is really big and the good thing here is that is returned. Great writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on December 23, 2010
Last Updated on January 25, 2011
Tags: love, megan, poem, day, with, you, journey




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