Serial Killer

i started reading about ted bundy and most serial killers and i just got into no not like im gonna go kill people tho but just got intersted

 

I'll kill them tonight

Slash them with a knife

No one will hear their screams

In the night

Ahh the blood shines so bright

 

It all started with a saying you see

To be or not to be

The next Ted Bundy

Or maybe John Gacy

But instead of little boys

I'll rape girls like Stacy

W***e who's always playing with my zipper

Maybe I’m Jack the Ripper

 

If you see me coming

You should probably run

I might be carrying a knife or a gun

Na the knife would be better

It makes the pain last forever

This is my Endeavour

 

See my name is Freak

Sitting in a room that reeks

Must be the body sitting in the sink

(Her name was Claire

Now I’m wearing her hair

I always wanted it long

Instead of bare)

I lived in the mind

Of this a*****e named nick

Boy he was a dick

Wouldn’t let me out for a bit

Afraid I would spit

And have people throwing a fit

Now he died

Cause a loss of pride

Now I’m giving this a ride

 

I am the new serial killer,

The greatest fear filler,

World’s sickest sinner

F**k being a winner

 

Author's Note

It sucks i know and i may have tried to hard just tell me honestly so that i may improve

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Very creepy, and you tried your best. I thought it was well written. You get a 100 rate.

[A]

Oh wow! That's creepy...but very well written. It kept my interest throughout the whole piece. Very captivating. :)

[WriterSki7]

Most interesting. Seems something akin to a rant to me (yes, that qualifies as poetry). You already know your peotry needs some improvement . . . so do just that. Keep reading it and re-writing, each time a little better than the last. Eventually it'll come naturally.