Serial Killer

Serial Killer

A Poem by Nick Almanza
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i started reading about ted bundy and most serial killers and i just got into no not like im gonna go kill people tho but just got intersted

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I'll kill them tonight
Slash them with a knife
No one will hear their screams
In the night
Ahh the blood shines so bright
 
It all started with a saying you see
To be or not to be
The next Ted Bundy
Or maybe John Gacy
But instead of little boys
I'll rape girls like Stacy
W***e who's always playing with my zipper
Maybe I’m Jack the Ripper
 
If you see me coming
You should probably run
I might be carrying a knife or a gun
Na the knife would be better
It makes the pain last forever
This is my Endeavour
 
See my name is Freak
Sitting in a room that reeks
Must be the body sitting in the sink
(Her name was Claire
Now I’m wearing her hair
I always wanted it long
Instead of bare)
I lived in the mind
Of this a*****e named nick
Boy he was a dick
Wouldn’t let me out for a bit
Afraid I would spit
And have people throwing a fit
Now he died
Cause a loss of pride
Now I’m giving this a ride
 
I am the new serial killer,
The greatest fear filler,
World’s sickest sinner
F**k being a winner
 

© 2009 Nick Almanza


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Nick Almanza
It sucks i know and i may have tried to hard just tell me honestly so that i may improve

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Very creepy, and you tried your best. I thought it was well written. You get a 100 rate.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Oh wow! That's creepy...but very well written. It kept my interest throughout the whole piece. Very captivating. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Most interesting. Seems something akin to a rant to me (yes, that qualifies as poetry). You already know your peotry needs some improvement . . . so do just that. Keep reading it and re-writing, each time a little better than the last. Eventually it'll come naturally.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Nick Almanza
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