Love Winks

Love Winks

A Poem by Confuser
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love, nature, relationships, anticipation, changes, rituals; whatever you think

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Love Winks

Every morning I walk the edge of the woods,

The rising shining sun winks at me passing behind trees,

We play our game as a ritual or a prayer,

We love our hellos and goodbyes,

Awaiting morning’s glaring flares,

Love is everywhere and nowhere.

 

Playing hide and seek,

I will find you, will you blink a wink?

 

I have become an insomniac, anticipating attention,

but like a train,

I can change my tracks.

To find you wherever you may go,

The roaring whistle of love loudly blows.

© 2015 Confuser


Author's Note

Confuser
Just wrote this morning as I walked with my dog by the forest behind our home. Any suggestions are always welcome. Hope it's alright! Thank you for reading, I so appreciate it. Special thanks to Ana Sophia, she looked it over, gave me the courage to post it. Thanks.

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Loved this one to.
Your rhyming is so great, it seems like it comes naturally doesn't feel forced, which is great.
This seems pretty romantic again, I love a bit of romance :)
but like a TRAIN,
I can change my tracks.
Really liked that part fr some reason, just thought it was cleaver.
Great write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A very touching and intriguing write ... Love truly does represent warmth and life, for when love grows cold, love has died ... Nicely done ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so amazing :)
Good lines, good thoughts and you work is really good!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved this one to.
Your rhyming is so great, it seems like it comes naturally doesn't feel forced, which is great.
This seems pretty romantic again, I love a bit of romance :)
but like a TRAIN,
I can change my tracks.
Really liked that part fr some reason, just thought it was cleaver.
Great write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful stroll through the forest. Thank you for the journey. Another great poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a really nice feeling write, I enjoyed reading.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really loved this one Dale. I like the sun games and the free feeling of this poem. Morning, noon, night, or middle of the night...your poem smiles.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have become an insomniac, anticipating attention,

but like a train,

I can change my tracks.

To find you wherever you may go,

The roaring whistle of love loudly blows.



Simply loved these stanza's lines here.



Yes this was amazing I simply loved it BRAVO nice work!



Thank you for stopping by my page
and your kind comments and reviews.



God bless. Benita


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

you're welcome I always have a note pad by my bed side so yes always good to have :)
Confuser

9 Years Ago

I am; last nite; I was trying to remember the words; and it was good; love and it flowed, dog/kid/hu.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

I always pray and ask god's help when I write he is the author of my words I give it over to him the.. read more
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Dale, Another great write, you certainly know how to arrange words in such a way that they mean more than face value. You are very talented. (By the way, thank you for your wonderful review of "her face." I'm new here and could not figure out how to reply to your review. I have a lot to learn about WC) I've got your homepage bookmarked because I believe I am now a fan. 8^) take care...riki

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Confuser

9 Years Ago

Wow, riki, you are so kind. A wonderful girl, Ana Sophia, you'll love her writing; so talented - en.. read more
glad she did give you the courage---this is a good look at just how love is everywhere and nowhere at the same time...i guess it is how we look at it, or look for it...and if we see it when it is right in front of us.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds like this could be the winner dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 10, 2015
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Tags: love, nature, relationships, anticipation, changes, rituals

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Confuser
Confuser

Manning, SC



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Happily married with three wonderful children. The first poem I attempted was Paper Heart which I submitted here last year. People here have been so kind and encouraging! Their feedback and reading t.. more..

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