A Sacred Bond Of Hearts

A Sacred Bond Of Hearts

A Poem by Confuser
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A Sacred Bond of Hearts, A Union of Two

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A Sacred Bond of Hearts

 

A sacred relationship between two

A holy bond of faith and truth

Revered and Strong together life long

A belief that never ends with strife

This is the devotion of our life

For infinity + infinity we will be

Loving constant hearts in sync

O dear, this vow we will keep

Forever together our belief

We make a home of joy and happiness

Like a warm fire, gently tended together

United, we are one not two

For eternity our commitment stirs

For that’s our unquestioning binding word,

Our life immortal with promises from above

Veiled devotion exposed every twilight & dawn

It’s our destiny and what we deserve

Together forever our love will remain strong

Happiness and joy will be lifelong.

© 2015 Confuser


Author's Note

Confuser
A Collaboration With Saddam....a wonderful writing partner. Thank in advance for reading, we appreciate review and advice. Sincerely, Saddam & Dale

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O dear, this vow we will keep
Forever together our belief
We make a home of joy and happiness
Like a warm fire, gently tended together
United, we are one not two
For eternity our commitment stirs
For that’s our unquestioning binding word,
Our life immortal with promises from above
Veiled devotion exposed every twilight & dawn
It’s our destiny and what we deserve
Together forever our love will remain strong
Happiness and joy will be lifelong.
wonderful write from both of you..beautiful lines...keep writing such beauty...:))

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

5 Years Ago

It was so much pleasant, thank you so much dear Anne. Dale is fabulous artist.
Cathiesblog

5 Years Ago

Love this one...True love lasts forever...the way it is meant to be ..
Confuser

5 Years Ago

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Than heavens I have found an author I can so gladly relate to. Your words show how I feel on the highest level - and I have only just started 'reading' you. Thank you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lovely words of love and devotion could be coast to coast or across the ocean Love expressed of this kind will last a lifetime supported by friend and family of all kind. this writings was so divine.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Marvelously written!
😊😊😊

Posted 5 Years Ago


This poem is very strong, Dale. Wow! Wonderfully powerful!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. What a wonderful collaboration and execution. Glad I visited to appreciate and enjoy...:)...............

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really don't know what to write, its the best poem i read for this day.
Thanks for sharing these words with us.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Woww! This was beautiful.
Keep writing..cheers!

-love Anahat❤️

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds like a poem about a strong and real marriage. congrats on this, collabs are not always easy but the two of you seem to be excellent together at writing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was nice like all the others, had a deeper message than most. However, it didn't contain the rhythm of silent beauty you had in other poems. I think maybe it's because it's free verse. I've never liked the type, but the message was better than anything Shakespeare could cook up. He wrote Sonnet 116: Let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments", etc.. but yours is so much better. I can read it without having to use a "No Fear, Teresa Dale":)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this poem. It saddens me when people don't take the marriage bond seriously. You've done a lovely job of capturing the sacredness of this tie. Thanks for the lovely read.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: Love, Faith, Devotion, Marriage, Vows, Commitment, Union, Destiny, Happiness, Peace

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Confuser

Manning, SC



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Happily married with three wonderful children. The first poem I attempted was Paper Heart which I submitted here last year. People here have been so kind and encouraging! Their feedback and reading t.. more..

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