A Sacred Bond Of Hearts

A Sacred Bond of Hearts, A Union of Two

A Sacred Bond of Hearts

 

A sacred relationship between two

A holy bond of faith and truth

Revered and Strong together life long

A belief that never ends with strife

This is the devotion of our life

For infinity + infinity we will be

Loving constant hearts in sync

O dear, this vow we will keep

Forever together our belief

We make a home of joy and happiness

Like a warm fire, gently tended together

United, we are one not two

For eternity our commitment stirs

For that’s our unquestioning binding word,

Our life immortal with promises from above

Veiled devotion exposed every twilight & dawn

It’s our destiny and what we deserve

Together forever our love will remain strong

Happiness and joy will be lifelong.

Author's Note

A Collaboration With Saddam....a wonderful writing partner. Thank in advance for reading, we appreciate review and advice. Sincerely, Saddam & Dale

Reviews

[anne]

O dear, this vow we will keep
Forever together our belief
We make a home of joy and happiness
Like a warm fire, gently tended together
United, we are one not two
For eternity our commitment stirs
For that’s our unquestioning binding word,
Our life immortal with promises from above
Veiled devotion exposed every twilight & dawn
It’s our destiny and what we deserve
Together forever our love will remain strong
Happiness and joy will be lifelong.
wonderful write from both of you..beautiful lines...keep writing such beauty...:))

[Confuser]

Thank you sooooo much Anne: Cannot wait for Saddam to see. I am so happy with it, because we wrote it together, I don't mind saying it!!!!

[Saddam]

It was so much pleasant, thank you so much dear Anne. Dale is fabulous artist.

[Cathiesblog]

Love this one...True love lasts forever...the way it is meant to be ..

[Confuser]

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[John Reese]

A wonderful walk through your love for another. I loved the tending the fire line . It denotes clarity and solidarity. Thank you.
John

[Terrence Chang]

I loved your write Dale. For however I have some suggestions in your line.
"As this is the devotion of our life
For infinity and infinity shall and will be
Loving constantly with every heartbeat
Syncing deep for the vow we keep
Forever together in our beliefs
Building a home of felicity and bliss".

Overall I enjoyed the read and also it provocated my thoughts. Thank you for your lovely post Dale.

[Confuser]

Thanks....Very good suggestions....I'll message you soon.

[Ana B.]

A beautiful collaboration. A very deep emotional write. Dale - you shine as ever, Saddam - you never stop inspiring. A wonderful work!

[emmajoy]

Beautiful, exemplary writing.. two writing as one.. rarely works but my goodness, this poem does and has. Not choosing favourite lines because they're all so lovely, sincere, finely writ.. and very worth reading over and over and over.. Thank you, both.

[Jennie Baron]

Congratulations to both of you on such a lovely affirmation of lasting love and commitment! It's truly heartwarming and so expressive of what marriage is about.

[MsJewel]

A sacred bond of hearts - what a beautiful title for this gorgeous collaboration. You two weave words together so well, I would have never guessed this was written by two poets. A seamless collaboration - whispering of eternal love.

:) Julie

[Lyndy]

Wow, this a good one! It's a beautiful poem.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

A Sacred Bond Of Hearts......... hmmm really nice to read

[mattavelli]

This was pleasant to read. Enjoy your life together. Thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem for the emotion of love. Each lines adding to the strength and need of the poem.
"Our life immortal with promises from above
Veiled devotion exposed every twilight & dawn"
I liked the above lines. I could write a complete tale from the strong statement. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Confuser]

Thank you Coyote, I remembering writing that...it was fun. Look forward to reading your work.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.