A Night Rainbow, The Moonbow

A Night Rainbow, The Moonbow

A Poem by Confuser
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Waiting for Love

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Night’s Rainbow, The MoonBow

A rainbow glistened in a dark sky

Spreading through starlight

Thunder roared as lonely clouds

Ripped into the atmosphere

Upon my wave of hopefulness

I search for you my dear

 

Miraculous Lights twinkle

Gleaming brilliant colors flow

Into my pleading heart and soul

I’ll wait forever, never to let go

Many years and many days

But nothing changed your plane

 

I danced for sweet rain to bring

You near, for the rare Moon’s

Bow to appear �" now I see

It’s half ring hidden in my memory

 

A hundred different ways to collide

With my propensity to laugh and cry

Waiting for drops to take my pain

Pretending my meek measures would

Make you smile, but life’s too short

For lonely clouds these parched days

 

Longing I asked the moon to come down low,

But the hellcats of hullabaloo said “oh no no”

You need only a mist to see his rainbow

Tenderly embrace our dark paradise

It calls for love’s blissful guise

© 2015 Confuser


Author's Note

Confuser
Moonbow rises at night, rarity: Just thoughts...Thanks in advance for reading/any reviews guidance are always appreciated. I made changes....like this version better. Hope you do...A Moonbow is a rare phenomenon

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Rainbow produced by the reflection of the moonlight, Moonbow, certainly a rare but must be a beautiful natural phenomenon.
Loved your imagery, the first 10 lines are my favourite, especially the given part is more than beautiful,

Thunder roared as lonely clouds
Ripped into the atmosphere
Upon my wave of hopefulness
I search for you my dear.

Well done, dear Dale.

armin. ...

Posted 5 Years Ago


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This is great. It flows easily. It has a sadness to it. You're right, life is short. I was reminded Friday when I lost my boyfriend.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Confuser

5 Years Ago

Oh sweet Melinda, thank you, but I'm so sorry you lost your boyfriend. It will get better!!!
I love this wonderful and blissfull piece of shimmering magic Dale,
a star as ever, please keep on shining :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


That's one of the sweetest poems I've ever read. Such beauty. Great work ma'am. I loved the poem. Hope you'll keep on amazing me with such great poetry. I get a lot to learn from you. Thank You. Aru.

Posted 5 Years Ago


amazing piece of your fine work....love these kind of refreshing poem which takes me to a state of trance ..:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Moonbow? Wow, the crescent shape of the half-moon stares at us on so many nights and I salute your imagination for relating it to a rainbow. Rainbows when the sun shines and moonbows, when the sun doesn't. Is this composed of multiple themes like searching for love ( not just a person to love), the fallacy of life...or did I misinterpret your intentions?
Wonderful creativity though. The flow kept me going and at the end you made me pause and think for a few moments.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Confuser

5 Years Ago

The moonbow is a real phenomenom, and it is the search for a past love; I waited for someone to find.. read more
Ashish Hegde

5 Years Ago

Moonbow is real? Haha sorry should have a done my homework. I just interpreted that you referred to .. read more
Confuser

5 Years Ago

Yes, it's beautiful!!! A rainbow at night....
First I like anything about the night...You have captured your thoughts well Great work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the way each paragraph ended..of course beautiful work...flowing with emotion and love...beauty...:))

Posted 5 Years Ago


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i like this...rainbows with the moon...great combination...poem shows longing, love and hope for reunion.

your imagery is so good, Dale....

j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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The atmosphere created by the imagery of darkness and beauty( night sky, and moonbow) and then simply the idea of embracing the "dark paradise", work very well to show the fluctuating human emotions we experience in longing for someone. Often those feelings are complex and shine a myriad of colors as does a rainbow, or in this case, the moonbow. Your poem beautifully manifest this aspect of humanity. Thank you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Added on June 11, 2015
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Tags: lonely, love, longing, hoping for change, waiting, mystery, witches

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Confuser
Confuser

Manning, SC



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