Collar Roaster

Collar Roaster

A Poem by Connor

The ups and downs aren't what make it a stress.
The twists and turns are what make me a mess.
I go this way then that, no slowing or stop.
I don't get to choose, no choices to swap.
I'm stuck in the same place, just going different paths.
I obtain human things such as love, tears, and laughs.
Does it ever stop? Can I be in control for a change?
I don't like where I'm headed; my faith slowly wanes.

© 2012 Connor


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Connor
Again, I want all the critiquing you can throw at me. Please help me improve.

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Added on December 6, 2012
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Connor
Connor

Circleville, UT



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