Too late

Too late

A Poem by Convalesce
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Help me with a name on this one! I just started writing it yesterday, and it's not fully finished and I will finish it probably today or tomorrow. But I really need help with a name, lol.

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In the hearts of the restless and eyes of the relentless
Breathless I lay here senseless tryin' to stay under arrest
But with the claws slaying reckless disobeying the rest
Swaying the crest of every praying guest til they display the test
But with being adolescent deaming myself benevolent 
Dreamin' of the present til my demons ascend in
Breaking my glass fort gleaming of resin
Seemingly deafen my voice singing to descendants
Of every broken glass, bottle, and every promise filled pendant
Regardless of any memory lying within it
Pushing to my limits trusting every single minute
Gathering resistance shadowing persistance forget it
I'm mastering perseverance, I'm answering to the fearless
I'm Shattering the tears 'n I'm staggering for the clearness
I'm Capturing the feelings of every straggling disappearance 
I'm Balancing my treasons trying to flatter every missed season

© 2011 Convalesce


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your fluidity with rhythmic literary motion is poetry in and of itself~ the creative~ sibilant smooth aspect of your word streaming is absolutely delightful to witness~ to experience~ I adore the way the sounds just embrace one to another as my eyes lilt from line end to line beginning~my mouth shaping the creative aspect~ the phonetic beauty you've created here~ brava!

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I love this. I think all of your poems are amazing but this is definately one of my favorites :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

your fluidity with rhythmic literary motion is poetry in and of itself~ the creative~ sibilant smooth aspect of your word streaming is absolutely delightful to witness~ to experience~ I adore the way the sounds just embrace one to another as my eyes lilt from line end to line beginning~my mouth shaping the creative aspect~ the phonetic beauty you've created here~ brava!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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it's very good

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really liked the last three sentences, This is a powerful and emotional write. like this

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on December 8, 2011
Last Updated on December 11, 2011
Tags: Helpless, hopeless, depressed, rising, ashes, up, rising up, no more

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Convalesce
Convalesce

Johnson City, TX



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I'm 19 years old. I love writing, obviously that's why I'm here :) My style of writing is very different to others. IT's very hip-hop influenced, you can put it to almost any hip-hop beat and it wo.. more..

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A Poem by Convalesce



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