Stuck Goth

Stuck Goth

A Poem by Pink Pastel
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A random poem I made in college bored^-^

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Iced in light,

Glimmering shadows,
Rock hard,
Die hard,
All night in my Starter.
The package delight,
Of fear with no reason,
To hop Alice away,
It's a way better way to listen

© 2016 Pink Pastel


Author's Note

Pink Pastel
It's Random But I hope you like it<3

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I just absolutely love the randomness in this poem! You had me interested just by reading the title!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pink Pastel

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much to be honest its been a long time now since I dont write anymore poems sadly.
Willow Wild

8 Months Ago

Aww! Too bad because you’re fantastic at it!
Pink Pastel

8 Months Ago

thanks I can again but need inspiration ha ha
I really love the title! It forced me to read this poem of yours which was great indeed!
keep writing :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pink Pastel

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much I appreciate this a lot^-^
Poetry doesnt need to make any sense at all. That is the beauty of it. Just put down whats in your head, and its art. I loved the randomness of this piece. Really great job, I enjoy reading your work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pink Pastel

4 Years Ago

Thanks girl this really made my night^-^♡
E.Jay

4 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
Randomness is the spice of life... Good job.
Wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'',

Posted 4 Years Ago


Pink Pastel

4 Years Ago

Thank you^-^
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i agree it is random but only the last part kinda threw me off, i like how it flow

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pink Pastel

4 Years Ago

thanks(^-^)
i like reading this! it reminds me of well how i use to be and how i am when i am alone with my thoughts. great read!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pink Pastel

4 Years Ago

Thanks I am glad people can relate^-^
"Who are you? I'm Alice."

Posted 4 Years Ago


W&oslash;lfy

4 Years Ago

True that.
sinNsincerity

4 Years Ago

That true hehe.
Pink Pastel

4 Years Ago

Lol I love how people can read something and imagine all different thanks^-^
Poetry doesn't always have to make sense. Sometimes it's just some seemingly random words strung together that just flow so smoothly who even cares about sense? This is exactly that. Such an odd piece, I love it :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pink Pastel

4 Years Ago

Thank you and that is true^-^
I love this poem and it's simply the random craziness I like most.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pink Pastel

4 Years Ago

lol I am glad you do
GalaxyGhost

4 Years Ago

Yeah, you're welcome !
Its lovely; I'm going to guess a spoken word poem. I'm not the biggest expert at poetry.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pink Pastel

4 Years Ago

Me neither but it happens

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Added on August 25, 2016
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Tags: sad, stuck, Random, weird

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