The Commentre Brothers

The Commentre Brothers

A Story by CoreyJackson
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Sammy is your typical teenager as he starts his 2nd year of high school in Toronto & his two friends but a mysterious boy that happened to be his long lost twin brother that has to save the world.

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        Prologue:
I was walking through a mysterious forest..I felt like no any kind of human. I had pointy ears and I could fly and this boy that looked just like me was beside of me smiling...he was my dream twin i called it as we would sit down and lay on the ground staring at the clouds. He would hold me tight like a big brother thing....but it felt like something different. I felt love and happiness. But this evil person that would try to destroy Commentre would try to come after us first because we were the most precious thing to the world and our parents which were the king and queen of Commentre. But they didn't know we were so close with each other for a long time but it should be wrong.......or should it not be...is it normal? My dreams were always me and him exploring the forests in Commentre and it was in a different dimension.....or planet i think. Either way I just felt so happy in my dreams but when I wake up, it's just reality as always. He isn't there and i got normal parents and a sister that is 3 years older then me. I was running with my dream twin which his name was Zen and my name was Ceon but he still called me Sam to make me feel better. All of a sudden I hear a distress yelling from across the forest and Zen tells me 

"Get up we need to go see who's in trouble my twin....come with me." 

His soothing voice drove me crazy....I immediadely followed him until we seen a girl that was a fairy that was tied up against the tree and there he was. "My dear twin warriors.....please help me! The evil one has tied me up to be eaten alive by these horrible beasts! Please stop him and set me free." I saw fear in her eyes....I started take apart the ropes tied on her crushing her body until she was set free. I turned around and saw Zen fighting him....he was wearing a hoodie and was throwing lightening rods at him until I started out of nowhere letting a huge pressure of wind out of my hands and he blew away where he would of got lost. 

"Good work Sammy, I mean....Ceon...that is your real name after all...." He told me hugging me against him.

"Zen.....theres something I've been wanting to tell you for a long time and it's-" All of a sudden I started blinking

"Sammy, wake up." He said smiling

"W-wait! I wanted to say-"

"Wake up. Sam. Sam? | Sammy?"

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            The First Meet:
"Sammy Harlow?! Wake up doofus! It's time for school!" I opened my swollen eyes as I had bags under my eyes and it was 6 am in the morning and theres my sister going through my closet getting my clothes out and Im pretty close to her if no one ever knew, she's the only one that knows I'm gay and she treats me like I'm her bff or whatever you call those kind of girls. I have two friends name Madison and Jacob but Jacob has been kind of the person that is the lead up the popular crowd and Madison is too but she doesn't really care about it. as for my sister Rena, she has that kind of personality that is like a prep but the nice kind and not the annoying kind that like to talk crap about others are what preps call "burn" others, heck she likes to help people with any situation. She'll try to talk someone out of a bad choice or decision or even suidcide. She's a really good sister....but the boy in my dreams I will never meet. He's just my imagination forever. Madison said theres this boy coming to our school from a different country, he's from Sweaden and he just transferred to Toronto because his dad got promoted. 

"Rena? Madison said theres this boy that is coming to our school all the way from Sweaden. He happened to be her old friend since she used to live back there for business wit her dad." 

"Ooooo really?! If he has a good personality and if he's cute then get to know him! I want my little brother to get his first boyfriend!"

"RENA!" My whole face turned red as a tomato and she laughed while we walked out into her car to head off to school. It was her last year but my second year of high school so this was the last year to see my sister in school until she headed off to college. On our way to school I was leaning against the window staring out looking at the trees since we lived on the outskirts of Toronto and school was like 20 minutes away and it didn't start until 15 minutes after we got there. She was telling me that I need to find someone that I know is the right person for me.
I kept telling her It might be a long time before I find that person though. 
But she told me I need to believe in myself and she was right. I needed to believe in myself this time.theres no turning back, its time to step up. 

I walked into school as I was looking for my new locker and 262 was the number of my locker....on the bottom and I looked up seeing some guy with the locker above me. As of now....my face was pink but I don't know why, I don't even know him. But he looks familiar for some quite reason. 

"o-oh, u-uh h-hi you must me uh...-" I stuttered 

"Anthony, Anthony Prescot. You must be Samm-" He stopped as his face turned into a different mood like he was shocked for some reason but to me I felt like I seen him before."

"Is...something wrong...?" I asked softly.

"O-oh I'm sorry Sammy, you look a lot like someone I knew back in Comme I mean, back in Sweaden. You see, I had a friend that looked exactly like you and he was pretty shy and quiet..." My face turn even darker red because it almost sounded like he was about to say Commentre and i started feeling queazy as I started walking off. 
I didn't start to feel good I felt something between me and him but it felt really weird. I swear I had to seen him somewhere but theres no way he was about to say Commentre because Zen is just a person in my dreams that was suppose to be my twin. I walked into the bathroom to throw some water on my face until i fly someone grab me and throw me against the wall. It was Jacob and the rest of the other boys from the popular crowd, well some of them.

"Jacob what the hell was that for?!"

"I can't believe your one of the f**s Sammy, I thought you were better then that!"

"I don't know what your talking about Jacob so can you please excuse me so I can- one of the boys grabbed me and threw me into the corner of the bathroom as I was trying to get up.

"Don't f*****g lie to me I can tell your one of them I seen how you act and talk, heck, you talk just like a gay person and those people are nothing but weak worthless f**s and- I punched him across the face knocking him to the ground as I tried to run out the bathroom and I looked back seeing the rest of them coming after me and I ended up into the back of the school in a dead end.

"Jacob...? Look we can work this out this doesn't need to get hasty at all, lets talk and-"

"Listen here you little s**t! Im going to f**k you up for punching me and ruining my face and- it happened, Jacob was grabbed by the shirt collar and thrown into the wall of the school alley as I looked up seeing him, Anthony right there holding Jacob against the wall telling him.

"Listen here pretty boy. I may not know him at all but don't touch him ever again got it? If you ever try to hurt him or even talk to him I will make this worse for you...and you do NOT want me to hurt you..." The looks in Jacob's eyes had fear as Anthony had anger in them....his eyes started to turn red and I started feeling anger.....I suddenly got up and grabbed Mark by the collar and told him to him and the rest to get lost and i looked in the puddle seeing my eyes were red. I suddenly was scared and I started freaking out.

"What is going on here Anthony?! Why are my eyes turning red?! Why am I feeling stronger and more anger and all of this?! Wait what is wrong with my ears why do they feel pointy?!" I freaked out even more until I felt a huge embrace and I was suddenly calm.

"What are you doing that for?! Don't touch me!?! Who are you for real?!" I asked him demanding.

"I don't know if going to believe me but it me, Zen. When I saw you under my locker I was shocked but also happy and I wanted to hug you badly. But I remember when I would visit your dreams, you would let me hold you tight and everything. But in reality your pretty stingy about people touching you aren't ya?    No.....this can't be real, I had to be all another dream for real. 

"Sammy, I'm telling you the truth because if you don't believe me then look where we are right now and tell me if you think this is a dream or not."  I looked around and realized we were at school anymore and that I was actually in Commentre. I had to ask him if it was a dimension or planet.

"Zen.....is Commentre a Planet or a different dimension?"

"Wow your still the same clueless twin aren't ya?" He asked me chuckling 

"So.....this is all real...? I'm not human at all I'm actually an alien...so my sister isn't really my sister..?"

"No...but I looked over you a lot and made sure you were living safe and you were happy. Now that I have you again, there is something I always wanted to do."

"A-and w-what is t-that actually?"

"This." our lips crushed together and my heart started racing and my face felt hot and then.

"WHAT?! What are we doing?! Were brothers, twin brothers and were like making out why?!"

"Sam....stop hiding it I know you had feelings for me forever....I know you...I can also feel it a lot." My whole face turned red as a tomato while i turned away. My heart was racing fast and i felt tears coming out of my eyes and all of the sudden I turned back into a human and fell to the ground. I felt like I was weak from what I just witness and did. But then I felt a warm embrace...usually I don't let anyone touch me but I needed to me touched badly.....plus it's my real twin brother that I thought was a fake imagination in my dreams this whole time. He's actually here with me and Im with him, I turned around and dropped my head into his chest holding onto him tight and it felt amazing. Seems like this new year is going to be different....unless.....he tries to find us and tries to also destroy earth....



 The Evil One:

I was sitting in the fields of Commentre with my twin brother embracing him tight never this would feel amazing to realize I had a twin brother never knew he was real and thinking he was my imagination. But, my family back on earth aren't my real biological family all this time. The king & queen are my mother and father and my only sibling is my twin brother Zen but he goes by Anthony on earth. But my real name is actually Ceon, Ceon Light.  


"So...what now?" I asked gazing into my brother's eyes.


"Lets head back to earth and get into school, don't worry i fro zed earth's time and everyone so no one won't notice that were gone." his soothing voice was real.


"Alright, by the way how did you and Madison meet back in Sweden?"


"Well...we were in 7th grade when we met and she was the only friend I had and there was my adopted parents that I live with now and we moved here since my adopted father got transferred over here for his job in the CEO." He told me as we were suddenly back on the school grounds and everyone was still in the halls getting there books and stuff for class. I started wondering if Anthony had any classes with me or not but how should I know? I can't since it. Anthony has that ability and I don't know what ability I have yet. Unless. if one of the ability I used in my dreams like the wind was real or not. I threw my hand up and almost knocked some stuff off of everyone's lockers.


"Whoops....." I said smiling goofy


"Sammy. You got to do that when no one is around. Your lucky no one saw you did that be careful next time alright?" He told me questioning.


"alright. What other abilities do I have Anthony? Do I got power of earth? Fire? Water?


"I'll show you when the weekend comes and we can head out to Commentre. But I DO know we got classes together....all of them were in all of the same class together. So how much did you think about that ay?" I turned pink from embarrassment as he kissed me on the cheek but then i smacked him for doing that in front of everyone but no one knows were twins so it can't be worse.


"sorry for smacking you. I forgot no one even knows were twins so..."


"It's cool, lets just say for now that we used to hang out a long time ago and that we just got together alright?"


"Uh....o-okay I-I g-guess.."


It was lunch time and we were all sitting in our usual crowd.....the populars......even though Anthony seem to not care because he wanted to sit with me and get to see Madison again, we were all having a good time. As for Jacob, he was on the other end glaring at me until Anthony shot a death glare at him.


"oh my god Dagger Lady!"


"Why thank you....but I'm a dude thank you very much..." I laughed and so did Madison but Jacob seemed to be even more pissed off just because what Jacob try to do to me earlier made Madison mad at him where she doesn't want nothing to do with him at all. Madison was totally convinced that Anthony was an old friend I used to talk to when I lived here and apparently visited here for a holiday and we got to know each other so she was also convinced that were going out but she was surprised and really happy and gave both of us a hug.


"I can't even like you two and Sammy! I always knew you were just so you know because the way you act and talked but I have nothing against it. I actually advocate the gay community and LGBT because people like them are awesome and they definitely deserve praise and their just the same as all of us. SO I'm proud of you two!" 

I hugged her tightly and Jacob just hugged her softly of course. 

It was ten minutes before lunch break was 

about to be over and it was just me, Madison, and Anthony in the lunch hall talking and such. the workers were cleaning up the lunch room and didn't mind at all. As the sun rays lighted through the windows of the school, it was time to head to class for the final block. We were heading down the class until everyone froze and I turned to Anthony but he was frozen as well which kinda frightened me until I turned around and I saw a mysterious person in a dark hoodie and dark pants and his hands were pale as a ghost and when he looked up, his eyes were blood red and black....


"Y-y-you...i-its y-you.....what do you want with me and my brother?! Leave us alone!"


"Oh Ceon....when I realized you and your brother were finally together once again...I Knew I had to put an end to you two once and for all. If I take you out first, he won't have someone to be with or to have the double strength to save you all."


"Shut up! You have no right to destroy where we were born at OR earth! Your a horrible man I ever laid my eyes on and you deserve to rot in hell if you ever lived here! ......people like you are horrible......that is why your going to pay for making our parents disappear....." My eyes turned red as suddenly My hands lifted up causing the water fountains to break shooting water against him making him suffocate. My body was full of anger all of a sudden and I wouldn't stop. Then I felt someone pulling me down. I looked back and It was a boy I seen in my dreams that I met in Commentre.


"N-Nigel?! Y-you can't be real! How are you here?! What are you doing here?!"


"Look Ceon! You and your brother are in great danger! He's after you two now since he saw you two found each other! Im going to unfreeze your brother and I'm going to send him and you to Commentre for a little while until tonight midnight! Earth will be frozen but when you two get back, it will be midnight! now GO!! GO!!" He unfroze my brother and we both teleported to Commentre and Anthony looked quite confused when I teleported us to Commentre but then I realized I wasn't in human form anymore. I was in my original form of a warrior fairy that had pointy ears, red eyes, pale skin and my hair was dark and short. 


"Ugh......I feel weird in this form...." I said feeling weird at the moment.


"You'll get used to it again in a little bit, but what's going on Sammy?!"


"He's back, and he found where our location was so now Nigel showed up and now he's fighting off him all alone!"


"What?! Crap I gotta go help him!"


"I'll come with-"


"No CEON! Just stay here I promise I'll be back, I promise you with all my heart..." He told me as he kissed my cheek and he was about to take off until he told me.


"By the way, mom and dad aren't gone anymore, their back in the kingdom. I told them we would visit soon but I didn't know this would happen so can you tell them I'll be there soon?" Mom and dad are actually alright? Well I guess I was wrong this whole time I guess..


"Oh uh, sure and Anthon- I mean, Zen? I kissed him for a moment telling him; "Good luck, I believe in you." He smiled big as he teleported off and I started walking through the fields of Commentre. It never changed quitely...the skies are the same purple as we can see the other planets surrounding the purple skies and I suddenly was stopped by someone.


"C-Ceon...?! Is that really you?!"


"Xena....?" I said as she ran to me and hugged me really tight as I couldn't breathe but I felt happy to see someone I started to remember back when I was at least 3 years old growing up before me and zen were separated.


"What are you doing here three days early?! I thought you and your brother were in school back on the human earth still?"


"Actually, We ran into.....him..." She gasps as she covered her mouth in surprise.


"Oh my gosh....you mean....The Evil One...?!"


"Yeah.....sadly..he founded us at last. So he's now after me and my brother. So now were coming here to hide for a while because the evil one expects us to hide somewhere on earth since he thinks we wouldn't ever come here at all." I explained as a chill of blue misty wind passed between us two and we both headed to the castle where I used to live.


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I was walking down the main hall to the main room as I was stopped by the gaurds. "Who goes there, who and what do you want?"


"Guards, it's Ceon, he's finally returned and Zen is back on earth fighting off the evil one with our teammate Nigel. Zen told Ceon to come to the castle and see his parents after 14 years. May he pass through?" From the looks in the guard's eyes he was really surprised that me and Zen have returned to Commentre, so he letted us through and I went through the hallway until I entered the main room seeing my parents talking, they never even changed. 


"Mom....dad...?" They turned around to see who I was as they studied me for a half of second but they suddenly dropped everything and hugged me tightly crying shouting my name.


"Ceon! oh my gosh my baby you have returned after 14 years! Have you ever ran into your brother yet? We also want to see him too!"


"It's amazing to be with you two again and back in Commentre. and Zen is with Nigel back on earth fighting....him..." I said with a worried voice because I was worrying about Zen like crazy and I really missed him dearly. 


"The....Evil....One...? He's back?! Son tell us everything while we send off our other sectors to haunt for him, I'll call for Zen and Nigel to return." As I was about to start to explain, I heard the alarm go off and I suddenly seen Zen and Nigel teleported into the room and I start to say. 

"Well, earlier this morning, I finally found Zen or as his earth name is "Anthony" I was on the bottom locker and he happened to be the top locker apparently but we both stared at each other and of course, I happened to be a chicken and run away until in the bathroom, he happened to save me from some horrible people that I used to talk to but they don't anymore. and then we were on our way to our human class periods until everything and everyone fro zed, including Zen, I was the only one not frozen and I turned around to see the evil one right there, his red and black eyes with the evil smile of his he had staring at me."


"Yeah, I have no idea why he would even freeze me as well since he's after both of us since were the top warriors of Commentre."


"Well, he told me he was going to take me out first since your weakness is to lose me..." Now I saw Zen's face that he was worried but he started walking towards me but I wouldn't move or step back for some reason. I felt him embracing me tightly as he looked at me and our lips were crushed together.



"WHAT?!?! ZEN WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!"


"Don't worry son. We knew this whole time about you two since we can since how others feel or how others feel about each other. Such as, pain, emotions, moods, anything." I felt completely embarrassed as my face turned red as a tomato and I felt Zen hugg me tightly and I suddenly was calm..."Ceon, don't worry I promise I won't do it too much my beloved twin." 


"eh....this is going to be tough for me.." I sighed as I started walking to my room I remembered was at from my dreams and I walked in seeing a double bed and I fell onto it laying down closing my eyes. "I just need to rest for a while and just relax..."

 I suddenly fell asleep into a amazing dream of me and my twin as I seen him hold me against him and feeling him caress me and kiss me but it felt like something I never felt..but with my twin brother? unearth if my parents founded out I had a twin brother this whole time they would be happy and ask me if he can stay with us because my family on earth is really family oriented. When we return to earth, I'm going to tell my parents. 

I suddenly opened my eyes and had covers over me and it was 21 pm and i realized my twin brother was in the same bed as me and holding onto me.


"Hmm.....odd a little yet really nice." I drifted off to sleep holding onto Zen until morning hits us again..


 Encountered Mishaps

6 am in the owning on the planet of Commentre...and I thought it would be some later or earlier time but no it was just about 6 am. I was in bed with my twin as I lay here and feeling his warmth of his body agains't mines, I felt actually good instead of nervous and such. people say me might encounter some mishaps while were here but I told them that theres nothing to worry about at the moment so just relax. 



"Ceon? You DO realize what were in for right?" Zen asked me with a worried face.


"Yes.....but we can't do nothing right now at the moment until we know he has stopped looking for us. THEN we can go after him on his least expecting point. my earth family once told me if someone tries to mess with you or anything tell them when you least expect it. That will drive them crazy it always works."


"I don't know Ceon...The Evil One is quite brave and a horrible man to mess with and if you tell him that, he might step up. you need to watch what you say towards him because he will get you at your weakest point." I sighed as he to,d me all of that so quickly made my mood drop...but then I felt him hugging me all of a sudden which cheered me up somehow. "If someone founded out back on earth we were twins that were this close with each other, It would be bad wouldn't it Zen?" I asked him.


"I don't really even know....only fate I guess you can say has that true answer for us. For now we just gotta say were dating and were not related I guess we can say. Because if my earth parents and your earth parents founded out we were twins that did all of this, we wouldn't be together anymore." We both went into silent as we were called into the main room to have a meeting with our parents and the others.

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Our parents were discussing on how The Evil One is on the haunt for us back on earth and that he's getting stronger on every minute. We both already got dressed and we got our weapons and Nigel and Xena were ready as well. Our parents told us be careful and explore Commentre for a little while then check back on earth later. 

We were exploring the fields of Commentre as the skies casted from purple to green and the planets would move passed us in the skies slowly. I suddenly felt my hand being grabbed by my brother while we were walking through the fields and we entered the town area of Commentre global point. There was a lot of people around laughing and cheering, playing around as I saw little kids running around and then everyone stopped and got on there one knee and bowed their heads at us saying, "Oh our mighty warrior twins of Commentre, please protect our fine and mighty planet as much as you can to keep Commentre protected." a man told me smiling as I bowed my head and we continue to walk through the grounds of the small town. It was apparently called Everglots that was located on the outsides of the kingdom area of the castle and it was the second biggest town. me and Zen thought to ourselves if we would run into any encountered mishaps while we were here at all but we both know the evil one is on earth disguised as some normal human being. 

while we were walking it got chilly all of a sudden

as everyone's clothes were changed into warmer clothes including us

and then my phone? started to ring.


"Huh? How in the hell am I getting reception on this planet? I asked.


"We use communication divides too Ceon...were not that boring.." he said chuckling as I answered the phone to see who it was.


"H-..hello...? Sammy here."


"Sammy?! Where are you?! Please help me! Im being held hostage and-" All of a sudden I heard a scream through the phone and a sound of it dropping until someone picked it up saying;" If you want your precious friend back Ceon and Zen then return to earth from wherever you two are at. and I promise she won't get hurt at all or tortured." 


"You?! Let go of Madison right now you evil sick a*****e or I swear, I'll kill you and it won't be hard! Since me and my brother grew were a lot stronger and I can kill someone with one punch!" I said as my eyes grew darker and everyone was silent in the whole town area wondering what was going on. "Listen here you brat! I will get control of Commentre.....AND earth soon and if you don't make it on time.....I will rip her up from limbs to limbs...so better hurry. I'll be waiting.." All of a sudden the phone was making the busy tone and my whole body was feeling tight as my veins popped out and I was really angry. 


"ZEN! WARRIORS! Were heading to earth! inform the king and queen that were going on a haunt for The Evil One Xena!" I said screaming.


"Yes sir!" She told me as she went running off and Nigel came up to me telling me, "your going to need my help for gadgets and weapons.....also my fire element would be useful for you two and the rest. lets head off. and were not teleporting. were taking a ship." 


"Alright Nigel. Come on Ceon! You, me, Nigel, and Sonders are heading there first to take care of him once and for all." 


"Fine....I can see why the guards told us about watching out for encounter mishaps now...." I was pissed as we were getting into the ships and we flew off into space heading to earth. Commentre was a planet that earth thought was a planet that was never seen so they just think of it as a doruf planet like pluto. Its actually the year 2022 things had changed since 2015 and everything is different. It was time we bring justice back to earth...and our home Commentre....




   Bloodlusting Haunts:


Flying through space...my veins were tight where I would of popped but i didn't care at all.....I was beyond pissed off because he has my best friend and as I see in Zen's face he's quite angry too. I walked over to him in the ship and kissed him on the cheek as he rose his head up to me with a small grin on his face as he hugged me softly. I walked over to Nigel to check our destination route to see how many more miles we have to go. "How many more miles Nigel?" I asked.


"About from this point, I believe just 5 more miles then we'll be at our destination to Toronto, Ontario." He said quietly looking on our pathway trying to focus, so I walked back to my seat.


"Ugh, this is going to be tough as I can see it..."


"And how is that Ceon?" Zen asked me in a concerned tone.


"He got more powerful throughout the years and now, he might be even stronger then us possibly..." I said as my eyebrows were lowered in a depressed look. I was really worried about my best friend and I didn't want to lose her at all...but I have no choice but to fight for her. The only thing we forgot is that were going to have to appear as humans until we can tell her the truth.


"uh.....Zen?" I asked worried.


"yeah?"


"You DO....realize were going to have to appear as humans right...? You to Nigel. The rest of you as well.." All I heard in the room was groaning and sighing except for Nigel, h seemed not to mind or care at all. I started to do the spell the reverses me back into human form since we were a few seconds away from where the dense part of the forest is. Suddenly we were all in human form and I saw Zen as the Anthony I bumped into three days ago at school. we lowered into the part of the forest where it was foggy and dark as I walked out to look for her screaming her name. "Madison?! Are you anywhere?! Madison?!" I screamed running around until I heard crying in a soft tone coming from ahead which made me want to see where its coming from. I struggled through branches and bushes until I found her, there she was. madison was tied up by vines and one vine keeping her mouth shut. "Madison! Are you okay?!?  She seemed to try to scream something out as she was struggling trying to show for me not to get closer I think. 


"Madison I'll untie you. Here let me get your mouth first." I untied her as she finally told me.



"Sammy?! Oh my gosh how did you find me?! You can't be around here or he'll-" She stopped as she screamed from the vine covering her mouth again and I turned around seeing him, The Evil One. He was right there smiling big with his mysterious hoodie on him. He seemed to be chuckling loud until I started getting angry and my eyes started to turn red and I turned around seeing Madison pulled the vine off of her mouth as her face was in shocked. "S-sammy...? Y-your eyes...they-re red..." She said worried until i said.


"I'm sorry for what your about to witness Madison, just relax." I said as started to transform into my real self. My pointy fairy ears appeared. I was taller, my eyes were red and my hair wasn't blonde anymore as it turned into solid cold black hair as my skin turned pale white. Madison started to freak out until I turned around seeing Zen and the warriors fighting the evil one I went on other to Madison telling her. "sh-sh-shhh...madison. It's me! You got to listen to me alright? I promise its me! Look in my eyes and you will believe its me!"


"I-I...believe you...your not human?"


"No! Now hold still, Im going to slice the vines off okay?!"


"Okay..." She said breathing hard. I sliced the vines off of her and she was free, I told her to go with Nigel to hide while I was helping Zen. "Wait, Where am I going?!"


"Your coming with us to Commentre. It's a planet outside of earth. it's that planet you all think is a doruf. He's going to be after you and the twi- I mean Anthony and Sammy okay? Trust us were going to keep you safe." Nigel told Madison as she completely understood and went on the ship with him and they took off. I started to run over to the others and did a jump kick on the evil one as he fell the the ground. As I walked over to my brother and told him, "Ready for our ultimate spell of our that we use on him?" I said smiling.


"Ready when you are." We both grabbed each others hands as we both put our other hands out as fire and wind came out of our hands and mixed together and directly hit him as he was hit hard where he was unconscious. 


"Hello? Yeah this is Zen of the main sector of the kingdom unit and protector of earth also. Come to Toronto Ontario on the left outskirts of the city to pick up The Evil One. Yes he's unconscious and we got him tied up. Alright see you in a second." He closed his communication device and the guards shown up by teleporting to our spot and grabbed the evil one and brought him back to commentre dungeon.


"He.....finally got him Zen.." I said surprised as I was pacing around and sat down on the ground just sitting there....thinking...."


"I owe it to you for helping me." He told me laying a soft kiss upon my lips and I flinched a little.


"Can we.....go back to Commentre to check on Madison?" I said as his faced turned into a small frown but he understood. "is something wrong Ceon? Usually you let me kiss you. Did I do something?" He asked me worried.


"Of course not Im just not in my best mood right now...Im sorry..it's just that Ever since I was 5, every dream I had was with you and I was always happy with you and we would play around the plains of Commentre and fly around. Then we got older and started to get closer with each other more...It made me really happy but....I'm scared to really feel or see the meaning of love. I know it's wrong for us to be like this with each other but...for some reason..I don't care but at the same time Im feeling guilty for doing something thats wrong...." tears started to form in my eyes as I started shaking and I sat on the ground in a ball crying. I was really mad at myself for making us feel this way but I also knew I loved him. I suddenly felt him going onto me tightly wiping my tears away and from there, I stopped crying. "Ceon.....I agree its wrong but I also know I can't leave you.....your my twin and your my everything to me and if I lost you...I wouldn't be complete at all....stay with me forever.." I suddenly buried my head into his chest and from there, I knew I was happy from who I'm with.


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We teleported back to the kingdom sector of Commentre as I seen Madison sitting with my parents talking....she was also laughing....i thought she would be scared or shy. "You okay madison? It's Sammy by the way. Remember Anthony? Theres something we been needing to tell you.. "I told her as me and Zen sat down next to her and we explained everything to her about where we actually came from and about me and Zen's relationship thats been happening. She seemed a bit surprised but apparently was smiling. She told us how we both had the same faces back at school and she said that we both talked the same and had the same feelings and emotions..... "So your saying you knew we were twins this whole time?! and you knew we were dating?!" Your not disgusted from this?!" I said freaking out.


"Of course not silly, on the Lifetime channel theres a lot of shows and movies that explain incest and books too. You ever seen Games of Thrones? Theres theist two siblings that share a relationship like that but you two's seems to be less vulgar and nasty. So I support it and you two will always be my friends no matter what." Me and Zen were both relieved to hear that. For hours we were all in the main room sitting talking and laughing around and we were all enjoying ourselves. 




  Daisy Violin:

Walking through the hallway of the kingdom just looking around to get to remember everything once again. I was slowly tip-toeing suddenly once I reach passing my parents bedroom and it was 22 pm at night (on our planet..) and I went out on one of the balconies of the castle. I sat over the railing looking up at the 3 moons that wondered over our planet every night. It was really beautiful to see every star in the sky since back on earth, everything you couldn't see in the sky due to the city lights flashing everywhere. I felt a cold breeze passing by and I turned around seeing some girl. she looked like an fairy of ice but ice fairies never came around the kingdom sector at all as I was told, "Hi uh...can I help you..?" I asked confused.


"You. Your the twin that knows  how to play the violin like a god, right?" She asked me as I stood there confused.


"Excuse me? I have no idea what your talking about and-"  She put her ice cold hand over my mouth as she grabbed a violin out of her bag and showed me, "This...is your violin Ceon. You named it Daisy when you first got it at the age of 3. For a person that learned to play at the age of 3, your very talented."


"I...I don't recall...?" I was confused. She then handed me the violin and asked me to play something. I held the violin stick up and started playing notes as I was some professional player from the gods of music or something. I started playing really fast and felt my fingers against the pure sturdy wood of the violin. I felt happy for some reason while playing it. She started to smile and after I stopped, she approached me telling me, "Ceon, I was your music art apprentice back when you were 3, around the age of 5 you became really incredible with the talents you have to learn so fast. You got a gift Ceon and I'm proud of you for that!"


"Maybe thats why I could always sing and play the guitar but I never played the violin at all. Thanks uh-"


"Ember. Professer Ember! If you ever need me give me a call alright? Farewell!" She flew away suddenly vanished like dust. I grabbed the violin and walked through the rest of the hallways throughout the night as it was a three crescent waning moon night. I reached the main room where the couches were at. I walked over and laid down on the big couch and looked up at the glass roof seeing other planets in the skies. It was a really nice night. 


I woke up happened to be on the couch. I must of fallen asleep here last night because theres a blanket on me and I see Zen sitting next to me as I was laying down. It was 7 am but no one was up yet, just Zen and Madison. Madison was reading the books in the kingdom's library since she likes reading a lot. 


"Hey there sleepyhead. How did you sleep?" He asked me with his soothing voice.


"Alright....but I still feel a bit tired and-uh-" He laid me on his lap starting to rub my head telling me, "Go back to sleep. Im right here." I nodded and passed out as Madison walked in seeing my brother having me on his lap she smiled and sat down talking to my brother.


"How did Sammy sleep?"


"He slept fine. He's a bit tired though so I laid him on my lap to cat nap. What book you reading?"


"Oh! I'm reading this book about Commentre. I never knew Commentre was an actual planet outside of earth this whole time." Madison seemed to be impressed from how much she learned about Commentre. she seemed to enjoy it surprisingly. I pretended to be asleep but I was actually listening to their conversation. I felt a kiss on my forehead as my brother said, "Stop fake sleeping Ceon I know your faking it."


"and what if I'm not?" I chillingly said.


"Get up Silly." He said holding me against him like a stuff teddy bear as I felt comfy listening to him and Maddie's conversation for a while. 


"So Sammy I was wondering if you could show me around Commentre today?"


"Well....if thats okay with my brother if he wants to tag alone and-" I felt his hand on my lips as he told me, "Don't worry about me, I have to help around the castle today with Nigel and the others. Show Madison around here today. She'll love it! "He said with a soft smile kissing my lightly as he departed off to the other room and me and Maddie started walking through the castle and I started talking about my violin. "Did you know I can play the violin Maddie?"


"Really?! When?! Why didn't you tell me?!" She said getting all excited.


"Since I was 3 apparently. and Im apparently the high ranked violin player in the galaxy."


"You need to do that at the next talent show this month. That could totally beat Jacob and he wouldn't dare try to challenge you ever again!" She started jumping up and down like a child that had to mud sugar.(or on steroids...) and we started walking out into the town from there...



to be continued:

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Added on July 9, 2014
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I am an originally known as a college manga comic illustrator but I also write Novels as well on Quotev but I want to expand my stories everywhere. Most of my stories are drama, fantasy, or romance. more..