Lackadaisical

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He found what he wanted

in her fresh mountain curls,

watching her drag her toes

through the earths muddy skin

whiskey to a tavern soul

and with his hands he will guide

a windy incubator into

this minute of a woman

He will make his honest treaty

and she will bend light 

into reality

choosing fear over darkness.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

commitment can be so scary....he loves with more than physical but she is emotionally short circuited
and her emotional world has lost its electric pulse.
i really like the metaphor...
"the whiskey to a tavern soul"

wonderful write....missed this first time around.

and again...no comments, no reviews? for a piece this good? what the hell!

j.

[Corset]

Thank you very much J. for stopping in and leaving your sweet comments.