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Frozen

Frozen

A Poem by Cosmic kid

It's like everyone I'm close to is going on in their lives and leaving me behind
I watch them move on
I'm stuck and there's nothing that I can do

© 2012 Cosmic kid


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I can relate to this. I'm becoming more and more different with every step I take, it seems. Ooh, that's good. I'm saving that for a poem. Anyway, all my best friends are growing away from me, and it really hurts. I'm sure that some day, I'll find someone just like me, and we'll just live one gigantic party, but for now, it hurts.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Admiral Kirk

8 Years Ago

:) Yeah, and the levels of jerkiness of your peers. I was only teased regularly by 2 or 3 kids last .. read more
Cosmic kid

8 Years Ago

You got that right :)
Admiral Kirk

8 Years Ago

:D Nevertheless, I can't wait! Though I'd be good if summer never ended too.



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I can relate to this. I'm becoming more and more different with every step I take, it seems. Ooh, that's good. I'm saving that for a poem. Anyway, all my best friends are growing away from me, and it really hurts. I'm sure that some day, I'll find someone just like me, and we'll just live one gigantic party, but for now, it hurts.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Admiral Kirk

8 Years Ago

:) Yeah, and the levels of jerkiness of your peers. I was only teased regularly by 2 or 3 kids last .. read more
Cosmic kid

8 Years Ago

You got that right :)
Admiral Kirk

8 Years Ago

:D Nevertheless, I can't wait! Though I'd be good if summer never ended too.
I understand the poem. People grow up and forget to enjoy life. I watched people change and wonder if they are more content or just accepted less. I tell people who are willing to listen. Find time for laughter and good friends. Life is hard. Better to make time for fun and do your best to be with good friends and family. Last line is opportunity. Find something you enjoy to do and hope there are more people with the same desire. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem. Made me think.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cosmic kid

8 Years Ago

If only people could find ways to enjoy life each and every day :/ thank you :)

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Added on June 28, 2012
Last Updated on July 13, 2012
Tags: Friends, drift, life, sadness, move on, stuck

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Cosmic kid
Cosmic kid

Ashland, MA



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