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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Screaming at the top of my lungs

Screaming at the top of my lungs

A Poem by Cosmic kid

I am an orb.
I am full of love.

I love everybody and everything.
All of this compassion is killing me.

Screaming at the top of my lungs.
I need love too.

Nobody's listening
Nobody cares.

© 2012 Cosmic kid


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I care about yo face mang.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cosmic kid

12 Years Ago

Only my face.
Whales

12 Years Ago

yes.
Cosmic kid

12 Years Ago

Great.
I feel the exact same way! I dish out love like it's free or something, but I never get anything back... Excellent poem! I like it. I wrote a poem that sort of illustrates this topic some time ago, but it's a bit longer... Glad to be able to relate.

Oh, and there is a small spelling error. I believe "nobodies" ought to be "nobody's", but if it's not, then never mind...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cosmic kid

12 Years Ago

Yeah you're right it was a late night poem I guess that's why there are more mistakes and it's short.. read more
Admiral Kirk

12 Years Ago

Me too. That's when most of my depressive episodes are, when I'm sleeping or about to be. And I writ.. read more
A interesting poem. Open the door to many kind of visions. Love can make us desire life and death? A very good poem.
Coyote

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 29, 2012
Last Updated on July 13, 2012
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Cosmic kid
Cosmic kid

Ashland, MA



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