I sure could use a hurricane

I sure could use a hurricane

A Poem by CountryInside
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just some thoughts from the most emotionel week of my life

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Crying my eyes out
Feeling the pain
Noticing anger running through my veins
All I feel like is cutting myself open 
Getting rid of all of this s**t 
But I guess all along my mind was just coping
I sure could use a hurricane to break this cage I’m in
Break it into pieces and let me out again

I’m feeling like a rollercoaster 
I’m up then I’m down
I swear I even one time made a loop
Don’t you dear to threaten me
Not when I’m like this
On the highest mountain 
Then in the deepest sea
I sure could use a hurricane to break this cage I’m in
Break it into pieces and let me out again

Spending all my day 
Walking up a mountain side
Finally being on the top 
But sometimes that just ain’t enough
Going too far, falling for so long
Hitting the road, creating a hole 
I sure could use a hurricane to break this cage I’m in
Break it into pieces and let me out again

Lying here on my back, staring at the stars
Wishing I could be there, but it’s just too far
I can’t take it any longer
Feeling tears building up 
When the hell is my hurricane coming?
I’m starting to think it wont
What can I do about it? 
Nothing but f*****g wait
I sure could use a hurricane to break this cage I’m in
Break it into pieces and let me out again

If my hurricane ain’t coming
I won’t sit and wait
I’m just gonna break this cage 
Break this f*****g s**t.

© 2012 CountryInside


Author's Note

CountryInside
ignore grammar and spelling

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I loved it 'cause I can totally relate to it. I Especially liked the hurricane part. But I acutally liked everything :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I just hope the hurricane you get isn't like the one from Oklahoma.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great writing. I hope you will get your hurricane

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on October 25, 2012
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Tags: hurricane, confusion, sadness, anger

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CountryInside
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Karup, Midtjylland, Denmark



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