The Death of Mia

Waking up on bathroom floors

How far will this go?

Keeping mind behind closed doors

Set at all time low

Blood comes retching at the touch

From so deep inside

Talons stretch the heart does clutch

Eyes shut ever wide

What happened to way back when

All came out with ease

Chocking, gagging Lion's Den

Falling to my knees

Mia's failing and dying slow

Where she did slack begins to show. 

Reviews

[Sia Blood]

wow, this is so deep and relatable.

[Wolfwind]

I wonder if this poem could be about the death of a pet bird? It certainly paints some stark and powerful images. I think you meant to say... "Choaking" instead of "Chocking" in the third stanza. I like the rhyme flow, that worked really well!

Great Ink!
Aaron

[Courtney]

Oops, yep! I meant choking.. I'll go back in and fix that with I can, thank you!
And actually Mia is the "affectionate" (for lack of a better word) for the eating disorder Bulimia. But of you see it as death of a bird then please continue to see it in any way you choose! Haha :) thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :) xx