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A Poem by Melliflower

© 2015 Melliflower


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Ty
To be so young you have an old soul. Your work shows that you have lived. I am deeply touched.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Melliflower

8 Years Ago

This piece was one of the first pieces i had written, which then went on to spark my interest in poe.. read more
I adore when a poem that doesn't need the gaudy words and long drawn out phases to paint a picture. this is so simple, but terrible complex in its nature and emotion. Really great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


Melliflower

8 Years Ago

I love physically simplistic works that make up for their shallow appearance by storing complex and .. read more
I love the simplicity of the words chosen with portrays complexity and deeper meaning.I love this write,well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

Thank you so so much! xx
Short but intense; it packs a punch. Very well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I love to keep my poetry short, though its meaning expansive. Again, thank you for your r.. read more
You write amazingly. Format's impressive as well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

Thank you! xx
I can't actually verbalize how much, or what I love about his most. It flows perfectly. It is vivid and simplistic. It singes.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment xx It honestly means a lot! I'm so close to throwing in the towel with my.. read more
Annelise

9 Years Ago

Don't you dare! It's one of the best ive read on here.
What a beautifully haunted write. Wow, this one blew me away. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much!! x
denise

9 Years Ago

I loved this! A short write like this, that evokes emotions so potently, is real proof of a writer's.. read more
Melliflower

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Denise! Every beautiful piece of feedback i receive for my work helps me so much.. read more

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Added on August 26, 2014
Last Updated on April 8, 2015
Tags: Love, Hate, Heart, Heartbeat, Heartbreak, youth, teenage

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Melliflower
Melliflower

Australia



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