Fireplace

Author's Note

A little draft x

Reviews

[FateDictates]

a "little draft" that packs a punch in presence! loved what you did with layout..great work

[Melliflower]

Thank you for your comment on the layout. I've been working on some new pieces though am unsure about the layout i've been testing. I'm glad you like it, and thank you for your wonderful review!

[FateDictates]

it works wonders and so very clever...

[Melliflower]

Thank you! x

[Astrid]

This is so clear and makes me think back to staring at the fireplace as I think about life and watch the flames dance

[Melliflower]

They dance so swiftly, like missing lovers swirling in a blind masquerade. Thank you for your review! xx

[Sam]

Mmm. You've got a ringer. Love it.

[Melliflower]

Again, thank you for your review. i'm in maths class at the moment and your comments have made me smile much more than any algebraic equation ever has. x

[Roshan Nair]

An ode to mysterious love.. great writing!

[Melliflower]

I like how you worded that comment... thank you for reviewing! x

[xbxbzdvdsv]

I really like this! good job.

[Melliflower]

Thank you for stopping by! x

[Confuser]

Profound, lovely so interesting, am pulling back layers, my imagination wild from your vivid images. To be 15, unthinkable to me - What a force to be reckoned with one day, I know you will see, and I am reading a child at heart, you are a child; just keep it that way for this world can change us in so many ways, No? I tell my son, just turned 14, what wonderful writers here. Amazing! I will read more to devour your delightful words. Thank you.

[Melliflower]

I'm always filled with great happiness and thankfulness when i read your reviews! Thank you very very much for your kind words, they really do mean a lot to me. It's beautiful to see the impact your writing can have upon people. Thank you very much for taking the time out to read my work- and i wish you and your son true happiness for the new year!

[Confuser]

How kind of you. Always honest, but we should strive to be kind, No? Wonderful New Year for you as well. Keep smiling and writing!

[Jamie]

Great work! Such a good read :)

[Melliflower]

Thank you!! Glad to hear you liked it. x

[Carol Blake]

Sometimes the best poetry is expressed in that 5 minutes. Lovely!

[Melliflower]

I couldn't agree more! Thank you x