Fireplace

Fireplace

A Poem by Melliflower

© 2015 Melliflower


Author's Note

Melliflower
A little draft x

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a "little draft" that packs a punch in presence! loved what you did with layout..great work

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment on the layout. I've been working on some new pieces though am unsure abou.. read more
FateDictates

9 Years Ago

it works wonders and so very clever...
Melliflower

9 Years Ago

Thank you! x
This is so clear and makes me think back to staring at the fireplace as I think about life and watch the flames dance

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

They dance so swiftly, like missing lovers swirling in a blind masquerade. Thank you for your review.. read more
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Sam
Mmm. You've got a ringer. Love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

Again, thank you for your review. i'm in maths class at the moment and your comments have made me sm.. read more
An ode to mysterious love.. great writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

I like how you worded that comment... thank you for reviewing! x
I really like this! good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by! x
Profound, lovely so interesting, am pulling back layers, my imagination wild from your vivid images. To be 15, unthinkable to me - What a force to be reckoned with one day, I know you will see, and I am reading a child at heart, you are a child; just keep it that way for this world can change us in so many ways, No? I tell my son, just turned 14, what wonderful writers here. Amazing! I will read more to devour your delightful words. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

I'm always filled with great happiness and thankfulness when i read your reviews! Thank you very ver.. read more
Confuser

9 Years Ago

How kind of you. Always honest, but we should strive to be kind, No? Wonderful New Year for you as.. read more
Great work! Such a good read :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

Thank you!! Glad to hear you liked it. x
Sometimes the best poetry is expressed in that 5 minutes. Lovely!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Melliflower

10 Years Ago

I couldn't agree more! Thank you x

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8 Reviews
Added on August 26, 2014
Last Updated on April 8, 2015
Tags: Love, Hate, Heart, Heartbeat, Heartbreak, Intoxicated, youth, teenage

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Melliflower
Melliflower

Australia



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My name is Courtney, and my bookshelf is filled with the most wonderful non fiction reads from all periods in history, while my blood pumps a mixture of caffeine, devotion for my final year of school,.. more..

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