You

You

A Poem by CourtneyShay

You have the ability to make yourself happy.

You have complete control over your life from now on.

No one controls you anymore.

You can get help to work through your problems, or you can live with them.

You can continue to think your worthless, or you can reveiw your strengths and learn to love yourself.

You can decide never to trust anyone again, or you can refuse to let a few rotten apples spoil your barrel of humanity for the rest of your life.

All of tje choices are up to you now.

And it's all downhill from here, if you let it be.

 

 

If you can get through life,

you can get through anything.

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© 2012 CourtneyShay


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I liked it.... i think that it is very good....

Posted 7 Years Ago


I liked :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is the best piece of writing so far. There is one spelling mistake though, tje is the. Other than that I love it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Uplifting and positive. A light in a dying world. We need more poetry like this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I liked this.....More people need this attitude.....Good write.....Whisk

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow the strength in this is amazing. Well said, Its all about letting, go I agree totally with this beautiful piece. Thank you :) We can let others drag us down to thier level or we can rise above it ! Rotten apples as you say.


Posted 7 Years Ago


These are called choices.... and you are the one to choose........I like the way you have written these lines.....beautiful :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Kes
Sweet. I'm always telling myself this stuff. I can never make myself change.
Great poem; deep message.
Keep up the hard work!
K

Posted 7 Years Ago


amazing, deep and nice message :)
just work a lil' bit more on the metrica, if i can give you an advice, split the sentences made by "x or y" in two :)

ex.
You can get help to work through your problems,
Or you can live with them.

You can continue to think you're worthless, or
You can review your strength and learn to love yourself.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Its about choice. Lovely write.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Hi my name is Courtney i am 16 ummmmm i have amazing friends and an amazing boyfriend.I write poems and songs.I love to sing and be around friends more..

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