Undoing

The collar button first,

my dear.

Gently now-

The next four.

Let me feel your hands

shake when you

brush the valley

guarding the rhythm

of my heart.

Slide the cotton from

my shoulders.

I want to unfurl for you.

I am the wild rose blooming

at the first turn of autumn.

Watch the blaze of color

across my skin.

Here, love.

Trace these freckles,

follow the trail the sun

has left, the curious

lover. I am indecent

and over-flowing.

Fill me up again.

Reviews

[Karmee]

I really enjoyed this write, this is really good.

[barleygirl]

THEEEEE most delicious sensual poem I've read in weeks! This is a chart-topper! WOW! Great imagery, so subtle yet distinctly obvious. Brilliant: "brush the valley guarding the rhythm of my heart." Beyond brilliant: "I want to unfurl for you." This is the kind of poem one wants to devour several times in a row (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[The Twin Arenas]

"I am indecent
and over-flowing."

Great line. Very hot.