Nightime Rhyme

Nightime Rhyme

A Poem by Eliza Pleasant
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I wanted to write this. I don't know why. Just wanted to. Enjoy!

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Hide.

Jump.

Slide.

 

Quick on your feet.

Hold your breath.

Can't miss a beat.

 

Look behind you.

Regret it.

Believe you're through.

 

Can't stop.

Don't quit.

Almost to the top.

 

Arms kept tight.

Round another corner.

Almost though the night.

 

Stitch in your side.

Barely jogging.

Find a place to hide.

 

Heart skips.

Notice a shadow.

Lick your lips.

 

At a dead end.

Turn to fight.

Waiting for Hell to descend.

 

 

© 2010 Eliza Pleasant


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This is a very great poem, also I love that last line....

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked how intense this poem was. Blunt (in a very good way) and very imaginative.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is really good! You can picture it in your head, but you have to use your imagination with it. I enjoyed this! Nice job!

Check out mine?

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Eliza Pleasant
Eliza Pleasant

Lubbock, TX



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