No Mercy

Song Wrote 29th Febuary 2010

Fake your apologies one more time,

Their lies will twist your mind,

You're cold-blooded, and never learn,

My hate for you a constant burn.

Your mistakes, Realisation.

Your mistakes are testing me.

But my mistake was loving you.

No conscience, Pure ruthlessness.

Your acid tongue flicks at what used to be.

Things change. Uncontrollably.

I'd like beat you down without mercy,

And teach you where you went wrong.

Wipe off blood smeared on my cold hands,

You'd been an evil harpy all along.

Dirty looks, Grin ear to ear,

Throw my way a hateful leer,

Please run, go hide, you'll be found

I won't let your screams make a sound

Stale life, my conclusion,

Stale life, so petty.

Your mistake was crossing me.

From seclusion to delusion,

Your acid tongue flicks at what used to be.

Things change. Uncontrollably.

I'd like beat you down without mercy,

And teach you some humility.

Feel my hot breath on your bruised neck.
Arrogant b***h to snivelling wreck. 

I'd like beat you down without mercy,

And teach you where you went wrong.

Wipe off blood smeared on my cold hands,

You'd been an evil harpy all along.

Choking, Choking on your bile

You spit more than you could receive.

Author's Note

Crits?

Reviews

[Corvus]

I love it. It's passionate, and it breaks all the rules of songwriting- you gotta love that. It's full of emotion and anger, and that makes a song really good.

From seclusion to insanity,
Try to run from what’s to come and what used to be.

Amazing. That's one of my favorite lines. I love the way it speaks. Keep it up!

[MissWordSmith]

i cant pick out a favourite line from this because i thought every line was filled with anger and passion, equal. i loved this. this had true feeling.

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

"Dirty looks, Crocodile tears, Wash them down with a hateful leer, I run, I hide, I'm found, Your screams don't make a sound" = ah-mazing