Our Final Fantasy

YES i stole the line "off to never never land" So what :P

Wake up, Take my hand.
We're off to never-never-land,

You and I shall be set free,
In our Final Fantasy.

We must fight for our right,
Run from the Night,
Day by day, The droplets fall,
I can hear freedom's call.

 

Ever-Growing.
Never-Knowing.
River-Flowing.
Winds-a-Blowing.

 

Our love is the light,
They don't know of our plight,
We'll illuminate the dark path.

This is our only chance.

 

Wishes dwell within the well,
Without hopes we're doomed to hell,
We, the ones run for that hill.
Couldn't sit there and watch you kill.

Reviews

[David Jae]

Very powerful and heart felt, with good use of rhyme.

Ganbare

[Jessica]

Reaaly good job Craig.
I love the rhythme....(spelling argh :/ oh well)
Very good....verry good....content is beautiful....
Very powerful and impressioning....
100/100 as per usual

[just rose.]

Love how you've taken off with the line and made something really cool. Good job.

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Wow. I really like this... The fact that it's creepishly' similar to the Metallica's song makes this even better....

Oh, and you stole "Wake up, Take my hand" line, too, didn't you? XD